And if the sloppy lines weren't an obvious indicator, I was literaly running on empty here.

And there you have it, what I did on a 24 Hour deadline.

I may fix it up a tad and finish it up the other 14 pages on my free time, but of course, I'll do that if I see that there's an interest for it.

I ask because I'm hoping to turn this into a mini comic and hopefully sell it at conventions.

So if you don't mind, I'd truly appreciate an honest to God opinion on the matter, not just faving.

Thank you.