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By Foxonian
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Not bad, a little short but not bad. One note to pass on to Foxonian though, I'm under the general impression that it's considered bad form to use parenthesis in fiction writing. A better sentence would be "the head of her recording label Apogee Records" or "the head of Apogee Records, her record label."
Other then that little nitpick, not bad.
Other then that little nitpick, not bad.
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