Tiny hands.

I had noticed that just after posting, they're only barely bigger than the ears. Something else to watch out for on upcoming entries.

The first thing I noticed is that the angle of the upper torso does not agree with the apparent positions of the shoulders and collar, so it seemed that the chest is twisted counter-clockwise quite uncomfortably. Then again, I noticed by looking at the back outline of the upper torso that it is more likely that the chest may be angled correctly, but positionally misaligned to the shoulders. (The ribcage is pushed forward.) You might want to draw the contours of the clavicle in, to help determine the position of the ribcage.

The second thing I noticed is that the head is kind of pushing the upper limit of how far it can turn in relation to the angle of the shoulders. (Which is about 90º) While this is not a problem in itself, at this angle, the neck should show some folds to illustrate that it is twisting to turn the head in that position.

Finally, it seems that you really did rush when it comes to the legs. With the torso at this angle, there should be no apparent gap between the legs as the gluteal muscles and tissue (the ass) that attach to the far side leg would be occluded by the front and sides of the near side leg.

Pretty cute style though, shows good promise. Keep it up!

If only everyone on FA commented so thoroughly! Definitely some advice I'll take next time I attempt a pose/view like this.

Five fingers plz, but I already said that.

Again with the looking at things/ triangle ears, and so on. A little more attention to detail is warranted.

These are circles though
But you're right on all those other points.

Doesn't matter. They are still amorphous!