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ALRIGHT this is the longest story i've typed so far with these DragonScape stories at around 20 pages! Sorry if thats a bit too long of a read but i wanted to do the story justice (or at least what i think does it justice)
So this story follows Olivia, a recently drekified Brit in a UK colony. Some locals and a town belonging to GoDomers ascendents
Shaggy out!
So this story follows Olivia, a recently drekified Brit in a UK colony. Some locals and a town belonging to GoDomers ascendents
Shaggy out!
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 1.39 MB
1) you know that is a good point. They kinda needed an excuse to get in, prophet or no a few years gone needs some sort of excuse to get in, warranting Olivia, might as well get her to pick up some pages
But again good point I can probably learn from that
2) I was thinking that it would be funny that Olivia could try a rousing speech only to get shut down by the disgruntled guard. I imagine the better situation would be for the riot to start without Amelia getting involved so she wouldn't be pushing the magical gas tank on the way out. I would say that was the original plan and a disgruntled guard kinda fucked that plan up and required Amelia to get involved
Life is a learning process for sure! I'll just make sure to make the next story better, thanks for the feedback!
But again good point I can probably learn from that
2) I was thinking that it would be funny that Olivia could try a rousing speech only to get shut down by the disgruntled guard. I imagine the better situation would be for the riot to start without Amelia getting involved so she wouldn't be pushing the magical gas tank on the way out. I would say that was the original plan and a disgruntled guard kinda fucked that plan up and required Amelia to get involved
Life is a learning process for sure! I'll just make sure to make the next story better, thanks for the feedback!
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