SO, this was a disaster and I blame my inability to color, it's no surprise I strive with black and white but you need color in your art from time to time but this was a train wreck.
1.) The first one was the one with the most work put into it and looks the best out of the two but could be MUCH better. The idea at first was to have the Cuddle Team Leader and Penny perform the "Surra De Bunda" or as I googled it "Brazilian Ass Dance" where the female slams her ass into the male's face with Cuddle's yelling "GET FUCKED BITCHES!!" in a very obnoxious manor because that's my critique on Fortnite as a whole, it's very obnoxious and cringey. My favorite part about this is Penny, figuring out how to color certain things on her was a challenge that I very much enjoyed, like her jacket is composed of light grey brush pen and a light brown colored pencil, since I didn't have a marker for that color I improvised and I like the result and I had a sharpie perfect for her jeans which was also a plus, so in the future I might draw Penny solo, same with Cuddle's, I got something planned for her too. What ruins this is the sky, after coloring it I did not like how choppy and dark the sky looked so I tried to mask that with the storm cloud but the way I went about that was terrible, then I tried white out on the text and wow it's bad.
2.) I then tried to redraw it and do the colors again but I just gave up on it when certain things didn't look as good as the first one, for one a lot of markers were dying on me and the whole thing was falling apart.
So yeah at this point I think I should just stick to coloring characters because fuck this shit just looks awful or maybe I should stick to black and white, I don't know.
1.) The first one was the one with the most work put into it and looks the best out of the two but could be MUCH better. The idea at first was to have the Cuddle Team Leader and Penny perform the "Surra De Bunda" or as I googled it "Brazilian Ass Dance" where the female slams her ass into the male's face with Cuddle's yelling "GET FUCKED BITCHES!!" in a very obnoxious manor because that's my critique on Fortnite as a whole, it's very obnoxious and cringey. My favorite part about this is Penny, figuring out how to color certain things on her was a challenge that I very much enjoyed, like her jacket is composed of light grey brush pen and a light brown colored pencil, since I didn't have a marker for that color I improvised and I like the result and I had a sharpie perfect for her jeans which was also a plus, so in the future I might draw Penny solo, same with Cuddle's, I got something planned for her too. What ruins this is the sky, after coloring it I did not like how choppy and dark the sky looked so I tried to mask that with the storm cloud but the way I went about that was terrible, then I tried white out on the text and wow it's bad.
2.) I then tried to redraw it and do the colors again but I just gave up on it when certain things didn't look as good as the first one, for one a lot of markers were dying on me and the whole thing was falling apart.
So yeah at this point I think I should just stick to coloring characters because fuck this shit just looks awful or maybe I should stick to black and white, I don't know.
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Not sure what to say.
Text in the top one looks mangled terribly. If you intend to leave text, try to leave space for it.
Skies are hard to get right traditionally... I'd say try to color the skies lighter, but markers aren't good at that.
I still kind of like the top picture, it just needs to be fixed. Bottom picture is unfinished and the scenery just isn't the same.
Don't worry, I suck worse. Absolute Suckage Sucks Absolutely.
All I've got are pencils, colored pencils, as well as these crayons and gel pens I don't know how to use effectively. For all I know, my critiques could make your art regress instead.
Text in the top one looks mangled terribly. If you intend to leave text, try to leave space for it.
Skies are hard to get right traditionally... I'd say try to color the skies lighter, but markers aren't good at that.
I still kind of like the top picture, it just needs to be fixed. Bottom picture is unfinished and the scenery just isn't the same.
Don't worry, I suck worse. Absolute Suckage Sucks Absolutely.
All I've got are pencils, colored pencils, as well as these crayons and gel pens I don't know how to use effectively. For all I know, my critiques could make your art regress instead.
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