Show and tell by Kaeota -- Fur Affinity [dot] net

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By Kaeota,
posted 16 years ago Writer

Oh I had fun with this *grins like a little kid*

Inspired my the Thursday prompt found http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/971636/ here.

Enjoy, I did!

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Kei-san ~kei-san

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16 years ago

Awwwww, it's a very sweet piece.

Though, I think the end of the first stanza would flow better with "shown" instead of "showed". Shorter, clipped syllables ftw.

Otherwise, very good and I look forward to reading more. Simple, straightforward, and superb message.