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Sigh... a majority over at e621 called that it was the brother. Unfortunately, they were correct and it now turns out to be an actual proposition and not just a prank.
It's fine that Chicobo says he likes Nick's gay side... but in *this* story we are never given any indication that Nick has a gay side. In fact, chapter 1 portrayed Nick as fully supportive of Judy when he sees how insecure she got. That's why writers use the narrative device of foreshadowing so it doesn't feel like an ass-pull where a single kiss turns Nick gay (or reveals a bisexual side completely out of left field).
Also, given that the Chapter 1: Epilogue has Judy specifically saying to Nick... "I should trust my family. I should trust... you", presenting Nick as seriously considering the possibility of adventures with Herv, really undermines that whole sentiment.
Finally, given how insecure Judy was about her relationship with Nick in chapter 1, Herv has really pulled a dick move on his sister doing this. Chapter 1 ends with him saying "what a cute couple..." chapter 2 seems to continue with "... I must screw it up".
It's fine that Chicobo says he likes Nick's gay side... but in *this* story we are never given any indication that Nick has a gay side. In fact, chapter 1 portrayed Nick as fully supportive of Judy when he sees how insecure she got. That's why writers use the narrative device of foreshadowing so it doesn't feel like an ass-pull where a single kiss turns Nick gay (or reveals a bisexual side completely out of left field).
Also, given that the Chapter 1: Epilogue has Judy specifically saying to Nick... "I should trust my family. I should trust... you", presenting Nick as seriously considering the possibility of adventures with Herv, really undermines that whole sentiment.
Finally, given how insecure Judy was about her relationship with Nick in chapter 1, Herv has really pulled a dick move on his sister doing this. Chapter 1 ends with him saying "what a cute couple..." chapter 2 seems to continue with "... I must screw it up".
I'm completely with you on it, dude.
Made me really sad. I have trust problems myself and stuff like that just...well...meh.
I love the art and all for sure, no offence to the artist! Amazing job done and I sure will fave and continue reading, but where the plot goes and main idea of it is not my cup of tea Q__Q
Made me really sad. I have trust problems myself and stuff like that just...well...meh.
I love the art and all for sure, no offence to the artist! Amazing job done and I sure will fave and continue reading, but where the plot goes and main idea of it is not my cup of tea Q__Q
Agreed. Vulpines and Canines are siblings on the zoological branch of Canid. Foxes have very good sense of smell. They possess up to 300 million olfactory receptors in their noses, compared to about six million in humans.
Even with Herv wearing Judy's uniform it still wouldn't mask his overall scent and Nick would easily be able to smell that something was not quite right.
Even with Herv wearing Judy's uniform it still wouldn't mask his overall scent and Nick would easily be able to smell that something was not quite right.
It's possible Judy wanted to set the groundwork for a threesome (or more) but it doesn't flow very well story-wise. The previous chapter was all about her being anxious and insecure about even introducing Nick to the family. To go from that to wanting her siblings to join in their sex life seems a pretty big leap.
Also unless she was very, very sure that Nick is bisexual, proposing a MMF /Judy / Nick / Herv hookup is risky. Since two participants are brother and sister (and incest is probably not on the table) it kinda means Nick is going to be receiving the bulk of the attention and if he's not a switch-hitter then the whole proposal gets awkward very fast.
Also unless she was very, very sure that Nick is bisexual, proposing a MMF /Judy / Nick / Herv hookup is risky. Since two participants are brother and sister (and incest is probably not on the table) it kinda means Nick is going to be receiving the bulk of the attention and if he's not a switch-hitter then the whole proposal gets awkward very fast.
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