Ria: Locked in a Room
Part 3 of the intro comic my upcoming Jay and Ria's NSFW comic commissioned by my big bro
trunks6 for his written story.
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Story by:
trunks6
Ria and drawing © 2018 Jhamar L. B. [Jay]
trunks6 for his written story.Next: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/28778114/
Previous: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/28318310/
Story by:
trunks6 Ria and drawing © 2018 Jhamar L. B. [Jay]
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Avian (Other)
Size 985 x 1280px
File Size 258.3 kB
True storytelling is letting the reader/viewer fill in the gaps and make their own connections. You are accomplishing this very well by teasing with the close framed panels in the comic, showing just enough but not giving anything serious away. You've really given us a glimpse of Ria's character in how she finds this private place to try something new, and her self-conscious embarrassment is very endearing.
Also, the way you add wing feathers to the arms is really cool and unique. I've never seen that style before, especially when the character is wearing long sleeves.
Also, the way you add wing feathers to the arms is really cool and unique. I've never seen that style before, especially when the character is wearing long sleeves.
I forgot some, but i have posted an old drawing because it's requested by a friend:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/27915462/
Here, they're just dry humping.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/27915462/
Here, they're just dry humping.
I've seen that one before. And it's not still not completely nude, it shows alot but not all. I was thinking more like this much exposure and a similar position to this.
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21975402/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21975402/
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