I love the 4th panel, that face is awesome. The whole page in general is good too.

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That's my favorite panel too. Thanks and I hope to keep it up.

If this develops into a full web comic, than I think you should keep the full page format. It works better for more action or drama oriented comics, and you can have varying panels too.

I also think he should be staked even if he is just a LARPer.

Funny thing you shoudl mention that. I told my wife I was thinking of doing this as a webcomic and asked her opinion as to whether I should start it as a strip or just go fll page. She ahd no real opinion on it and said so. The full page thing just kinda happened. I sat down to rough out a quick layout to see if I had an idea and I must've. Page one happened without a script, without a plot and without anyhting but the roughest cut idea as to where I wanted to take this. I say, if a story wants to write itself and it chooses me as the messenger, who am I to argue?

I don't think all larpers should be staked, but in this case...