Hehehe, Once again, this story is my kind of thing. I hope you keep it going

Eventhough the ideas are there, I'm an inexperienced writer (though an experienced reader =P) I feel as if there is too much dialogue, but I find it very hard to move the writing to a good mix between description and dialogue

Well, I guess you're right. Just detail movements and describe certain environments like you would if you were walking into different rooms and speaking to different people. I think it's really good for an inexperienced writer though... I think you'll do great

+ You earned another watcher

=) I'm glad you like it, definitely gonna write more about this one, currently a bit to busy with school and work though =( hard to find a good balance there too =P

Yeah. they can be pretty tough to balance out, but you do what you can and go with your heart and mind... Not with what everyone else tell you to do. You are a God in yourself... Or so the theory goes.

yeah but even for a god, life in this world isn't all about sunshine and roses =P

Point taken... Humans can either become Socially Equal, end Warfare and Famine and strive for a better future... Or they can Nuke themselves into nothing but a gloomy memory of still journeying Space Probes and a small memorial plaque and flag on the Moon.

Yeah unbelievable that there are still people denying the fact that mankind has done such a wonderful thing as sending people of our species into space. To quote Armstrong, "That's one step for man, one giant leap for mankind."

I think mankind will survive though, eventhough that a big part of the population is ignorant, don't forget that there is that small but growing group of intelligent people.

Neil Armstrong, is one of my idols... I would be one of the last people on this Earth to believe he didn't set foot on the Moon with Buzz Aldrin and plant that flag. Many people are so skeptical, they only want to know the bad things and not the good ones. I mean, they have no idea what these people have gone through and accomplished, and what many possibilities of the future are. These people should be put to shame.

Yeah. One quality is, I'm more of a Creative-Intelligent person than a Mathematical Problematics Expert, but I see no reason why there shouldn't be more people like this and I see myself as hopefully changing the world one day. Well.. I'm not going to be a Film Director for just the money and fame you know

Hehe, movies are a very good medium to get your ideas across to other people =) and well the money is a good thing =P You could use it to invest into science, and other things that help the world go forward instead of backwards =)

Yeah, well that's the idea. I might start with Features first, and then I'll move onto Documentaries... That is, when I finish High School xD

Hehe, thats the nice thing of what I want to do =P I'm not waiting until I finish school, as we speak I'm already busy with starting up a little one mans company in webdesign =) It is what I love doing afterall.

And once I grow big (or so I hope =P) I'll invest in science, and donate computer time from my idling servers to science. (Everyone can do that btw via BOINC) Y'know, I might write a journal about that =) the more people donate computer time, the faster scientists get their results, the faster advancements in their field of work can be made. (And its cool to say that you've helped making that cancer-medicine by donating computertime =P)

Well, I am making my own little Short Films already, trying to experiment with different Filmmaking Processes. And I love doing that as my passion

I'll donate some computer time if it helps then... I wanna feel responsible for something good... At least until I find another way of making things happen more quickly

I hope one day, they'll cure all Genetic / Biological diseases and conditions... At least then everyone would get an equal chance at life

If you want to donate computer-time, just google BOINC =) what is your youtube account? I wanna see those short vids =P

Alright, I'll do that later

Well... I haven't really posted up any of my Shorts on there... Just a few mistakes, lol
But if you like stuff like Star Wars, you might like my Music Vids for it.

Enjoy! lol

http://www.youtube.com/user/DarthOxillious

I'm sci-fi fan ;) tho I'm more of a stargate/startrek fan =P

Well, I used the Theme to the Next Generation on 4 of my vids... If you find them

I'm a Trek Fan, but more of the Voyager and DS9 Series. I loved the new Star Trek movie too

my all-time favourite startrek series are voyager and enterprise, next in row is TNG, after that TOS, and DS9 never really got me that much. I definitely loved the newest star trek movie, went to see it on the big screen, it was great.

Besides star trek, and stargate (the pilot of the new stargate Universe was great too), I'm a huge Dr. Who (and torchwood) fan. Do you know those two too?

IDK... Enterprise didn't seem much like Star Trek at all. But I guess, it was an earlier time for Starfleet and only a hundred years since the Nuclear Holocaust. And I did too, it was cool!

Yeah, I watch Dr. Who all the time, and I'm a follower of Torchwood too I guess

Oh... Damn... Forgot to hit reply, sorry about that man.

then tell me if you agree, david tennant, the tenth doctor, is the best of them all =P

oh another series really worth watching is Merlin =D
and bbc just has the best documentaries =)

just watched your "A tribute to war - Europa", great video, really fitted the music

DAVID TENNANT IS THE BEST DOCTOR OF THEM ALL!!! I can't say the new one is doing any better of a job

I might take a look at it and yeah, I've seen BBC Docos.. It's all on the History Channel

Thanks a lot man, it was hard to find all the footage, but I got it done eventually

The harder the work, the more worht it is in the end (well usually that is =P)

gonna see how the new doctor is gonna be, but its gonna be hard for him to replace tennant.

Oh, almost forgot o.O warehouse 13 is def worth watching too =P

gonna listen/watch more of your vids now =)