This is just a idea that I hope ChaosCroc will like for this ^^; I also hope he likes what I did with the Staff of Tyamet ^^; heh
Name: Lisa/Tyamet
Age: 17
Family: non known of, was adoted by Sonic and Amy when they found her as a baby.
Likes: to get what she wants, Runnic, her privite space.
Dislikes: being told what to do, Nightela hogging Runnic, people trying to ask her out.
Weapons: Staff of Tyamet/ turns into a Sythe.
Powers: magic she learn from a book that was with her as a baby
BackStory: found as a baby abanden, Tyamet was rise with Runnic and Nightela as part of the family, she look up to Runnic like a real big brother, perhaps more?
she likes being called Tyamet sent in the spell book of her's it tells a story about a woman name Tyamet and how cool she was to Tyamet.
one day she found out where the staff of Tyamet was and ask Runnic for help, the went and got it fighting off Danagers and more.
if Runnic ask her she will help out best she can, if anyone other ask she just walk away not saying a word.
Tyamet belongs to ChaosCroc
this is a test idea I hope Croc likes ^^;
Name: Lisa/Tyamet
Age: 17
Family: non known of, was adoted by Sonic and Amy when they found her as a baby.
Likes: to get what she wants, Runnic, her privite space.
Dislikes: being told what to do, Nightela hogging Runnic, people trying to ask her out.
Weapons: Staff of Tyamet/ turns into a Sythe.
Powers: magic she learn from a book that was with her as a baby
BackStory: found as a baby abanden, Tyamet was rise with Runnic and Nightela as part of the family, she look up to Runnic like a real big brother, perhaps more?
she likes being called Tyamet sent in the spell book of her's it tells a story about a woman name Tyamet and how cool she was to Tyamet.
one day she found out where the staff of Tyamet was and ask Runnic for help, the went and got it fighting off Danagers and more.
if Runnic ask her she will help out best she can, if anyone other ask she just walk away not saying a word.
Tyamet belongs to ChaosCroc
this is a test idea I hope Croc likes ^^;
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fanart
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 452 x 676px
File Size 34.1 kB
Okay let me get see what I can say about this...
1. She look up to Runnic like a real big brother, perhaps more?
No she wouldn't because Tyamet is a independant person and would to slit anyone throat. She has a brother which she doesn't get on with well so how could she even get on with Runnic?
2. She likes being called Tyamet sent in the spell book of her's it tells a story about a woman name Tyamet and how cool she was to Tyamet.
That is boring way to get a name
3.one day she found out where the staff of Tyamet was and ask Runnic for help, the went and got it fighting off Danagers and more.
That is also a little cliche as the name.
4.If Runnic ask her she will help out best she can, if anyone other ask she just walk away not saying a word.
No she does this with EVERYONE.
She not YOUR character, if you want her in your project then MAKE her the way she has been created to be. She wouldn't be Tyamet if you changed her personality.
1. She look up to Runnic like a real big brother, perhaps more?
No she wouldn't because Tyamet is a independant person and would to slit anyone throat. She has a brother which she doesn't get on with well so how could she even get on with Runnic?
2. She likes being called Tyamet sent in the spell book of her's it tells a story about a woman name Tyamet and how cool she was to Tyamet.
That is boring way to get a name
3.one day she found out where the staff of Tyamet was and ask Runnic for help, the went and got it fighting off Danagers and more.
That is also a little cliche as the name.
4.If Runnic ask her she will help out best she can, if anyone other ask she just walk away not saying a word.
No she does this with EVERYONE.
She not YOUR character, if you want her in your project then MAKE her the way she has been created to be. She wouldn't be Tyamet if you changed her personality.
Uh, Runhurd I'm not saying anything nasty. (if you call the ABOVE nasty)
I think you put ALOT of effort in to this, and that the design is AWSOME!
Everyones unique and the ABOVE won't except it.
Plus if you & ChaosCroc are good pals, than he'd except it and thank you!
I'm just trying to cheer you up!!
I think you put ALOT of effort in to this, and that the design is AWSOME!
Everyones unique and the ABOVE won't except it.
Plus if you & ChaosCroc are good pals, than he'd except it and thank you!
I'm just trying to cheer you up!!
Yeah he put SOME effort into it. But he just made a character who is badass and loved into... a teenager with a crush on HIS character.
The art is fine, I like the design.
His bio for her isn't fine though. He should of at least know that Tyamet isn't the 'I really need you' girl. Why change her? Her personality is wrong for who she is, and if he respected Chaoscroc character he would keep her the way she was. Not change her.
The naming of the character is cliched and over used as with how she got her staff.
And I wasn't being nasty, it is called critism. A thing artist needs from time to time. I was not flaming him at all. I have explained to Runnic what I mean and Chaoscroc has agreed with me as well.
As long as Runnic doesn't take it heart I am fine with it. I did explain I can sound harsh sometimes to him. But he is fine with it.
The art is fine, I like the design.
His bio for her isn't fine though. He should of at least know that Tyamet isn't the 'I really need you' girl. Why change her? Her personality is wrong for who she is, and if he respected Chaoscroc character he would keep her the way she was. Not change her.
The naming of the character is cliched and over used as with how she got her staff.
And I wasn't being nasty, it is called critism. A thing artist needs from time to time. I was not flaming him at all. I have explained to Runnic what I mean and Chaoscroc has agreed with me as well.
As long as Runnic doesn't take it heart I am fine with it. I did explain I can sound harsh sometimes to him. But he is fine with it.
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