Pleased to do so, as far as I can figure out your dialogue:

Panel 1:
Narration: "Everything changes when they come. How sadly boring."
Canine: "Hey Loser! Got any cigarettes?"

Panel 2:
Murzikz: "Smoking kills, moron"
Canine: "Wut?"


Panel 3 is fine. Panel 4 and 5, I'm guessing from the drawings, so I may get this wrong.

Panel 4:
Narration: "It's so easy, it's ridiculous."

Panel 5:
Narration: "My muzzle is bleeding, they have wasted my time, and its raining. How sadly boring."

And I got the panel numbers wrong. I forgot that the wordless panel in which he is walking is Panel 1.

How better to say in last panel "and nothing changes" or "no changes" ?

There are a few ways to say that.

"What else is new?" This is usually said sarcastically.

"Same old, same old."

"Nothing has changed."

"Same shit, different day." This is vulgar, but that may fit your comic's theme.

"As usual."


Personally, I recommend "Same shit, different day."

Okie =)

panel 4 :
i mean: Murzikz was in so huge troubles, that this canis like puppet show

panel 1
may be: how sadly boring, but all changes when they come

What do you mean by "Sadly and boringly"? I think sometime I should get a Russian-English dictionary and learn some Russian to help you out.

Some offers in Russian can consist of one word. Such as "Night" for example. Not "the situation depresses", but "painfully".
I mean: "Rainy. Sadly. Boredom." . But I am not assured that so will write correctly

Okay. With that, I will rewrite the dialogue to be more effective.


In Panel 2, I left out "rainy". The illustration shows that it's raining.

In Panel 5, I guessed from the illustration that Murzikz defeats the thugs with ease.

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Panel 2

Narration: "Another boring, depressing night. That all changes when they show up."

Canine: "Hey, loser! Got any cigarettes?"

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Panel 3

Murzikz: "Smoking kills, moron"

Canine: "Wut?"

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Panel 5

Narration: "It's so easy it's pathetic".

----

Panel 6

Narration: My muzzle is bleeding, I've wasted my time, and it's raining. Another boring, depressing night."

What better:
"My muzzle is bleeding, I've wasted my time, and it's raining. Another boring, depressing night. As usual."
,
"My muzzle is bleeding, I've wasted my time, and it's raining. Another boring, depressing night. What else is new?"

or

"My muzzle is bleeding, I've wasted my time, and it's raining. Another boring, depressing night. Same shit, different day."

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This is best: "My muzzle is bleeding, I've wasted my time, and it's raining. Another boring, depressing night."

Let me give you a bit of advice and explanation as an author. As you'll notice in my latest suggested translation, the comic page starts and ends with the same sentence: "Another boring, depressing night." Through this, the concept that nothing has changed is suggested. Often, suggesting an idea is more effective in writing than plainly stating it -- at least in English writing. I am certainly no expert in Russian literature.

Oh, I see. Correct.

panel 1
We had an advertising of chocolate "picnic" with hyperactive camels and a key phrase "all varies when they come"
I try link with this phrase

Not offer - i mean sentence. In Russian sound absolutely equally.

Oh, English has many words that sound the same or are spelled the same (or both) as well.

may be - not "boringly" but "tedious"

Boring works.

panel 2
i try say:
"Smoke is harmful, of it die, moron"
Murzikz dont mean only sigarets

I know. The proper way to say that is "Smoking kills, moron."

And the proper spelling is "cigarettes."

How to tell that fact that
"Smoking is dangerous, but it will kill you not"

"Smoking is bad for your health," is the best phrase to say "Smoking is dangerous, but it will kill you not."

But "Smoking kills, moron" is much more effective. It is terse, it is forceful, it is a common phrase, and it sounds correct for that situation.

I'm not just trying to offer better spelling and grammar, I'm also trying to help you have the best writing overall for your comic.

thank you. I see.

"Those things will kill you." is traditional.

panel 4:
It so often gets to troubles that it is habitual for it. So habitually that it is not inclined to consider it as trouble. It is necessary to tell not simply that it not a problem, it is necessary to specify that it rather, I think.

I suggest: "This happens to me so often, it's gotten tedious."

How better to say "thanx 4 help with translate" on list ?

comix by mart hamsy
thanx 4 help with english text JD Kraaikamp
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/mrinitialman/

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Comic by Mart Hamsy
Thanks to  mrinitialman for Help with English.

And you're welcome. :)

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Maybe: This happens a lot. I'm getting bored again.