I didnt recieve much constructive critism on what was wrong with the scetch, but now I finally figured out whats wrong, after working on this piecie of shit drawin for more than 5 hours, untill 6am in the morning..
The EYES, they SUX like hell!

I just hate everything about it, and just wanted to get it over with..

Its a bit too brown vertion of Mr. Kaizer.