Oh boy! This is lookin' so good! I love the colors. ♥

YAY Fluffbirbs! XD seriously though I Love this species. will be happily watching this ^_^.

Call the fire department!

one: i love the art style second this looks like a comic i would want to keep an eye on XD YAY cant wait for the next pages

awwww don't get mad!

No problem! Nothing could possibly go wrong!

Why do I expect this thing going bad real fast?

Lovely work!

What's going on in the last panel? The one with the lighter was in the foreground in the previous panels, but now he's in the background? Did they both swap places or did they both turn around?

The characters are still in the same position, the camera angle is what changed.

If I may, this is very confusing. It breaks what is called the '180 degree rule', and because the character designs are so similar, the reader may easily confuse the characters. I would recommend flipping the last panel horizontally, so that the darker character consistently stays on the left, while the lighter character consistently stays on the right. That way, it's much easier to understand.
Here's a little tutorial: https://www.deviantart.com/phitus/a.....rial-156607638
I'm sorry if this comment is unwarranted, but I hope it helps! Everything else about this page is great.

Haha, I just responded to a note on DA saying the same critique! You're absolutely right, and I think flipping the panel is just what I will do before uploading the next to pages. Thankfully there's no dialogue so it's a pretty easy fix! You're not out of line at all, thank you for speaking up and linking a very useful tutorial. I'm still new to comic making, so this is very helpful to me!

Fixed! Let me know if you think this reads better. :D

Much better!
I'm glad the comment was helpful and well received. I've been studying how to make comics since I intend to make one myself, and the 180-degree rule has become particularly burned in my mind, ahaha

This reads much better, thank you for going out of your way to make it more legible.

Neat fire puzzle, also great colours and lovely design.

Heh, love this sibling moment, such great expressions and that startled flinch! XD

That face expression is so funny x'3