Well... English is not my native language... but I think that... if you want to... do it or not technically it's okey... use the short form of "Do" in denial... like... "Don't" or in the case of being "does" "doesn't".

I'm afraid that's the only thing I can help you with... since my English is relatively basic... and I'm not an expert on this... however... I appreciate you sharing this to understand a little more about story of your characters and that... I hope my comment has been useful. ':3

Thank you~

I don't know English at all

And for me now everything is useful

You're welcome... a pleasure to help. :3

What happened to the guy in the bed?

He got into an unpleasant story. White ran into another "winged", and he was stronger.

The dog's ether was badly damaged.
As a result - lost the wing, several fractures and a coma.

// yes, I love my character.

We always hurt the ones we love XD

Gosh... this is really emotional ;-; Really great job putting it all together in a short little comic! Really makes me interested in hearing more from your guys.

Thank you~

I hope that we will continue to have the opportunity to continue this story

Wow. this story sequence was extremely well done. As an illustrator myself I know what work like this must take. Very well done. And the twist at the end here was jaw dropping and has all the feels. Great work.

Thank you very much for your kind words)

This idea was stronger than me. I had to sketch it...

I am glad that you stare unafraid into the darkness of our hearts and put a light inside. Thank you for letting us look into this world of theirs and reassuring us with their "humanity". :)

This work is wonderful to behold, and I love the carful detail that you have added to this piece and your use of shadows.