March, 23 2006
Night Time
2100 Hours
Sounds of metal bashing on wood over and over again, trying to get into a building. Sounds of splinters and angry grunts being formed filled the quiet nighttime air. Screams and pleas for mercy followed through, all going ignored. Outbursts of pain and sounds of violent beatings and struggles echoed within the building, followed by silence. Fifteen minutes later, a lone patrol cars siren filled the air, foreshadowing of what was to come soon from the event that just happened a few moments ago.
Heading towards the destination given by dispatch, The loud droning sound of the sirens and the roaring engine of the patrol car being nothing but all they heard, officer Rev and officer Pavele, trying to break the monotony. Begin to give guess on what happened, and why. “You know, i’m guessing it’s because of a personal vendetta and all that, probably money and the sort.” Rev went first. “Well, i’m guessing it was to rescue someone how about that?” Pavele retorted. “Okay! Wanna bet on it? I got a twenty on me.” Rev suggested for the fun of it. “Sure, why not.” Both the human and red panda shook on it. Cementing the bet, making it official. “Five minutes till we reach the area. We’re gonna see who's right soon.” Rev said jokingly, almost missing a turn in the darkness, turning last minute to catch it, making the tires squeal from the forces involved. The turn, in this case was only dimly lit from the surrounding streetlights, and the cars own headlights as well. “Woah, calm down there evil-knievel, we don’t want to end up being a scene ourselves, On the way to a scene” Pavele said unusually calm, and sarcastic as usual. “Hah, you right.” Recovering the vehicle from their sudden maneuver. “Alright, we’re here.” Rev said turning off the siren, and just leaving on the lights. “I’ll tape off the perimeter, You can...” Rev was about to finish, but then was cut off from Pavele.
“Nah, you go ahead, i’ll tape off the area, you did respond to the call after all. It only makes sense Rev. ” Pavele getting out of the car, going to get the tape from the trunk. Rev, just sitting there deciding if what just happened was just Pavele being lazy, being passive aggressive, or both, grabbed and slung his camera around his neck and got out of the car, looking at pavele digging in the trunk for the tape, proceeded to make his way towards the building, with the freshly opened up wall as the humans entrance, opposed from the locked wooden door just a few feet behind him; into something out of an insane nightmare. “This is Officer Rev! Anyone here? I’m coming in!” Rev shouted into the building. “You really think if anyone was there, they’d actually call out? Especially a bad guy?” Pavele said loudly while taping off a sizeable area for them and possible backup units to use. “It’s protocall man. C’mon.” Rev replied slightly annoyed ”Just saying.” Pavele said taping off the last of the lines of tape. “Well, whatever the case, I see some others inside, i’m going in.” Rev said pulling out his standard issued sidearm. Waiting no longer, went inside. Careful to not get caught on the splinters from the hole in the wall, Rev noticed it was only a one story tall building, and a small one at that, maybe two rooms by the look of it, in this case, a wooden door. Rev stopped and looked around in the room, and saw a what appeared to be a mole rat, in a lab coat, barely responding. Rev seeing this immediately holstered his firearm, and proceeded to tend to the mole rat. “Sir, what happened? You’re badly hurt.” Rev asked the mole rat. “I… I… I just wanted to make… *cough* My… Rainbow colored slime girl squad...” The mole rat again fading out of consciousness. “What?” Rev asked out loud and verbally confused. “What on earth did he mean by that?” Rev, immediately going to his radio, called out. “Officer Rev here, We have a 10-52 over.” A few moments later. “Copy that, an ambulance is on the way, over” Rev, hearing this proceeded to turn around, and was immediately met with what looked like a metal machine, one that looked vacant, and with a tube dripping with pink slime.
Rev at a loss for words took his camera and focused a shot of the machine for later evidence to use. Getting closer to the machine, Rev closely inspected the tube leaking an unknown pinkish slime, the thing that mainly caught Revs attention. Looking at it, Rev didn’t want to touch it, but did what he could in the circumstances, take a picture, and did just that. Focusing on the tube dripping the unknown pink slimy substance, Rev got a clear picture of it, and proceeded to radio in the sudden change in situation. “Dispatch, also put out a bolo for a possible victim MIA, over.” Getting a confirmation from dispatch, Rev moved on. Warning Pavele of what was possibly in the area. “Yo Pav! Watch out, there’s some kind of unknown substance around here, watch out and don’t touch it man!” Rev, was waiting for some sort of confirmation, but got none, worrying the human. “Pav?” Rev called out again worried. “Rev… Come here man.” Pavele responded as if under some sort of spell. Rev wasting no time bursted through the door at the end of the room, connecting to the other room gun drawn. “Pav what’s wrong man?” Rev asked looking at the red panda all worried. “Turn around man...” Pavele responded monotonically not breaking his gaze away from what he was looking at. Rev walking up to Pavele hearing this was afraid to do so at first, but finally did so after a bit. “Okay? Wh- Oh my goodness.” Rev immediately fell silent as did pavele a bit ago. Strung across the small room were six machines, all with various bodies on them, affixed to them with straps and clear rubber tubes attached to the said bodies lower regions. All of the female variety, and all exposed to the world and in this case, to the two police officers, in more ways than one, so to speak. Rev noticed five of them to be a mix of various species, ranging from a husky, to a panther, to a few canines, except for one. One was of the marine variety, a shark. Rev had a fear of sharks, and so seeing her in addition of everything else they saw, made Rev completely break for a bit before regaining his composure.
“W-what the heck man… What is all this?” Rev trying to muster up the courage to take a picture of the scarring scene for evidences’ sake, but couldn't. “W-we need to get them out of those machines man.” Rev said. “Yeah… I’ll take one side, you take the other?” Pavele responded. “Sure.” Rev said finally managing to take a picture, albeit one; of the scene, and heading over to the nearest machine. “Alright let’s do this man!” Rev wasting no time began unbuckling the straps that held one of the victims to the machine. “Alright, let’s make this quick.” Pavele responded unbucking some straps as well with experience and finess, unknown to the human. Rev barely getting one victim out of the machine, helped her out of the machine and safely onto the floor. “One out of three done, moving onto the next! How bout’ you?” Pavele already done with the second one responded. “On the way to the third one.” Rev looked at the pandas progress and was amazed oh how fast pavele managed to get through the other two. “Dang! That was fast man!” Rev said in amazement. “Nothing to be amazed at, just lots of practice. Come on!” Pavele said with usual his deadpan tone. “You right. Lets go!” Rev said just finishing unbinding the second captive from the machine and helping them onto the floor safely. “Onto the third one on my end!” Rev responded to Pavele. “Third one almost out on my end as well here, this one’s a bit more complex though, kinda fitting being it’s a shark I suppose.” Pavele said usually deadpan, and a little bit sarcastically. Rev instantly turning around hearing the mentoning of a shark. Before Rev even managed to say a word, another sudden angry voice broke the already tense silence. Making both the human and red panda stop in their tracks. “You fools! My… My...” Both Rev and Pavele had their eyes fixed onto the mole rat, the same one Rev tended to earlier and slowly began reaching for their firearms, but even that was interrupted. “MY RAINBOW COLORED SLIME GIRL SQUAD!” Hearing this, both Rev and Pavele were taken back. “AHHHHHHH, NOT YET.” The mole out of nowhere, grabbed out a small remote, and proceeded to activate it. “THEY CAN STILL EXIST! MUHAHAHAHA” The mole rat proceeded to barely run off into the night away from the scene. With in a few seconds the machines in the room began to spur to life and began warming up and the pumps attached to them beginning to slowly to fire up to life and the various vats of slime began to slowly drain. Out of the six machines however, two were still attached to them. The shark Pavele was working on, and the panther Rev was working on as well. “Oh shoot. The machines are coming on! And that mole rat is getting away! Right now, he’s our only victim turned suspect!” Pavele managed to get some of the straps loosened on his end responded “I’m faster, i’ll go after him! You get these two out of the machines!” Pavele began to give chase to the mole rat. “You got it!”
Rev managing to get his third victim free and onto safety against a nearby wall along with the others, moved onto Paveles last victim, the shark. Rev turning around and was slightly frozen in fear, but seeing the slime slowly travel up the thankfully long clear tube, reminded Rev, his time as short and he had to get to work fast. Rev, mustering up his courage to barely face his fear, literally face to face; got to work and began to frantically untie the shark from her machine. Rev seeing the orange colored slime already halfway up the tube made him even more frantic then he already was. “Oh Frick.” Rev looking at the tube, and back to the shark, only to be met with a somewhat piercing glare. Rev began to feel more nervous and somewhat queasy. But he knew he had to get her out of there, and so, to buy some time, Rev took out a pocket knife and pierced a hole in the tube to buy some time, and began using the knife to cut the shackles off, something he wished he’d done sooner, and not at a time of urgency like this, something Rev himself laments for doing quite often. Only a few seconds have passed and the hole he poked in the tubing already gave way and the amount of slime being pumped the tube negated the hole, only resulting in a slow made mess of unknown slime. However, despite the act of buying time seem to have failed, Rev as indeed able to cut off the last of the restraints and barely manage to lift the large shark off the machine. However, Rev being only five foot four inches tall, and the shark feeling about six feet tall, maybe even more, had a lot of trouble doing so and, already having trouble with the others, wasn’t helping. Rev also trying desperately not to have his own face get buried in the completely bare upper chest region, and trying not to get the sharks sandpaper textured skin to tear his own off at the same time wasn’t helping either. However, Rev managed to get the shark off the machine, despite all odds, just barely in time to see the slime in the tube begin to overflow and spill out the top. The tube originally, intended for the shark, and by extension, the other unfortunate victims previous on the other machines thankfully taken off minutes ago.
“Alright bud” Rev said nervously trying to ease the shark onto the ground as he did the others. “Let’s get you onto- Wha-AAAAAAAAEAGH!” Rev, in the process of getting the shark onto the ground, accidently slipped on some of the slime on the ground, managing to keep his footing, but accidently dropping the shark a bit, getting his clothes and skin slightly grinded up from the sharks sandpaper like skin. “Aaaaergh... You okay mam?” Rev despite bleeding a little, still showed concern for the others first, than himself. The shark, a little lost, nodded her head in confirmation anyways. “Alright good, that’s all that matters.” Rev, still holding on to the shark, began helping her towards a wall where the others freed moments before, were all laid against to relax and recover. “Dispatch over.” Rev radioed in, after a few seconds the radio came alive. “This is dispatch, over” “This is officer Rev, officer Pavele is in current pursuit of a suspect; mole rat, dark colored fur, glasses, and was last seen wearing a lab coat. We are also gonna need a hazmat crew here at our location. Unknown colored liquids from various machines have been spilt, their current contents unknown. Additional medical assistance also needed as well six more additional victims, over.” Rev finally making his way towards the other females against the wall, lowered the shark safely with them, hand still on this radio, looking at the females him and pavele just secured waiting for a response. “Copy that officer. Additional paramedics inbound, hazmat put on alert and an APB has been put out, over.” “Copy, thanks dispatch.” Rev responded, and shifted his focus on the ladies on the wall. “Are all you ladies in any other pain or hanging in there?” Rev was bestowed upon nothing but silence, but their looks and body behavior, said otherwise. “Hmm… Can any of you talk?” Rev asked politely. “All of them shook their heads” Rev nodded in agreement, and proceeded to take out his notepad and pen to give one of them. “Here, if you’d like, on your own will. Take this pen and notepad, write down your name, and sum up what happened, if you can. Then flip the page, and pass along the notepad to the other. I’m gonna head back to my car can get you all some blankets. You poor ladies must be freezing right now.” As Rev began to go back to the patrol car, the ladies all nodded at Rev’s request. As Rev made his way back to the patrol car, Rev radioed in to Pavele. “Hey Pavele, you’ve been quiet, any status on your situation?” Rev getting no response, from the radio, began to page again while opening the trunk to the patrol car. “Pav-” Rev was interrupted when a familiar voice called out to him, making him stop.
“Calm down Rev, im here. Little creeper was just a bit faster than I expected.” Pavele shouted towards Rev returning back to the scene. Rev, getting the box of emergency blankets out of the car, closed the trunk and responded back towards Pavele. “Well, I least i know you’re still alive!” Pavele responded with giving Rev the finger. Rev chuckled at this and made his way back inside, back to the women. “Okay ladies, let’s get you all covered up yeah?” Rev began handing each female a blanket, making his way down the group, with the last one, being the shark. Rev reaching her, met again with her piercing gaze, gulped his throat, and gave the shark the blanket, while the shark returned the favor, and gave Rev back his notepad. “Thank you.” Rev said, to the shark, nodding in both appreciation and confirmation, and putting the blanket over herself, as did the others did as well. Rev holding his notepad saw Pavele and the handcuffed mole rat walking into the room, began to look though it, starting with the first one entered in:
Tempest - “I just happened to be running by this area one day, just minding my own business. Next thing you know, there was something that caught my eye, almost hypnotic it was a little tiny little spinner toy, it looked interesting. I went over to look at it, got caught up looking at it. Everything else was a blur, but I remember being here for the time being, on this machine. Embarrassed really. There was a few other females here as well. Thank you very much, for rescuing me.”
Bleu - “I joined my friend in her taking an offer for some temporary help, just wanted to make sure she was safe. We both got to this building, some creepy person grabbed my friend and injected her with something, then next thing you know before I could react, he got me as well. I later woke up seeing my friend across from me, along with a few others in the same situation. Out of nowhere, loud crashing, then screams. Then, your partner saved me. Tell him I said thank you.”
Grace - “There was an ad online for a few, temporary volunteer help for some research. The pay sounded nice, so I took the offer. We both arrived, greeted to a freak with glasses injecting me. Things went dark, last thing i saw, was him grab my friend. I woke up here, unable to talk. Thank you for rescuing us.”
Aya - “Sergeant Hardacre. I’m the Husky. Last I know I was on patrol. Doing paperwork and waiting for any calls. It was a slow night. I thought I heard someone near my car and… Well, that’s all I remember. What day is it? How long have we been missing? Can you bring us something to drink? I’ve got a headache and aching for some revenge”
“Tori- I came home from work one day, really tired and all that. Next thing you know, I wake up here, attached to this machine and all that, next thing you know. Loud crashes, and screaming. A little later, you and your partner come in, freeing us one by one. You saved me, and in the process, got sanded by me. Sorry about that hun.”
Reading all of this, Rev immediately felt a little at ease with the shark around, after she apologized for earlier, and noticed all but one wrote in the notepad, and it was the dark furred canine with red eyes looking bored of the situation at hand. Rev also immediately noticed one of them was a supposed officer, reported missing a few days prior. Rev immediately looked up and saw the now confirmed whereabouts of the missing officer and immediately reaching for his radio. “Dispatch, this is officer Rev again, I can confirm the status of the missing officer Sergeant Hardacre. She is currently alive and...Safe, so to speak. Here, at the scene. Over.” Rev began to walk towards pavele when the radio buzzed to life. “Copy that. The police station has been notified. Over.” “Thanks” Rev responded. Rev met up with Pavele and the mole rat now in their custody. Rev trying not to lash out at the mole rat for willingly do something so disgusting.
“What is your name?” Rev barely said though his teeth. A few seconds of silence passed as the mole rat eventually spoke up. “I… I am Dr. Neferio Ipping! The one who’s dreams you just crushed from your interventions!” As Rev used every ounce of willpower to keep from him taking a few swings at this creep, Rev exhaled and began writing down the mole rats testimony in his notepad. “So, how would… No. Never mind that. why. Why, did you do it. All… This? Rev asked. “Well, it’s simple, i wanted my rainbow slime girl squad to live! And that slime YOU happened to just haphazardly let spill on the floor… Was my way of doing that!” Rev looked behind him to see the machines still pumping their various colored slimes. “OH FOR FU-” Rev cut himself off and began feeling though the mole rats lab coat and eventually pockets until he found the transmitter for the machines. “H-hey! That’s mine you don’t have the right!” Rev pressed the button on the device, shutting down the machines. “Shut up. After what you attempted to do here and tried to get away from, I have every right to do so. Creep.” Rev got his notepad out again then proceeded to continue asking the mole rat. “For this rainbow girl squad and all that, how is that supposed to work? It's just different colored slimes.” The mole rat looked at the human for a bit and then laughed. “Is that what you think? All this just slime? No. How about, DNA coded, nanobot infused attitude activated mood slime!” Rev stopped writing things down hearing this. “What on earth are you saying?” The mole rat exhaled. “What im saying you plebeian is that, the colored slime has a purpose… Red for inspiration, Orange for determination, Yellow for joy, Green for hope, Blue for volition, indigo for loyalty and purple for… lust” The mole rat smiled deviously. “Why are you smiling?”
“Lets just say… Before she was taken away, and you two got here, stopping the other six. A certain… Snow leopard already had a good amount put into her. I don't know whats gonna happen to her, or... I-if anything at all but, regardless though, I WIN! HAHAHAHAHA” Rev looked in horror to the other room he came in through where the seventh machine was, leaking purple slime. Rev put it all together in his head and immediately lost his composure. Rev proceeded to throw his pen and notepad to the floor and proceeded to grab the mole rat, surprising even Pavele, and kicked out one of the mole rats legs making him fall only to be held up by his collar by the now angry human. “WHAT DID YOU DO? WHAT TO YOU MEAN IF ANYTHING HAPPENS?!? YOU BETTER ANSWER ME YOU FREAK!” As Rev was about to beat down the mole rat himself the radio came to life, it was dispatch. “Officer Pavele and Rev, first responders are ETA five minutes. Over” Pavele acknowledged but Rev didn’t. “Five minutes?” Rev said to Pavele while looking at the six girls they rescued. “Yeah. Why?” Pavele responded. Rev looked at the red panda with a look only Pavele himself knew. “Aaaahhh, was wondering when you’d stop your whole goody-two-shoes-by-the-book behavior Rev.” Rev threw the mole rat in front of the ladies he tried to do unspeakable things to just earlier. Rev looked at the Sgt. in the crowd of women and slightly nodded, this alone was enough for them to both know what was about to go down. “Ladies. Two minutes. No broken bones. Save the face for identification later. Everything else… Have at it.”
As Rev began to turn around, the last thing he was was the Sgt. getting up and running at the mole rat kicking him furiously in the stomach, before the other ladies getting up and joining in. What followed was the sounds of beatings and the screams of the mad scientist. Rev passed by Pavele to get some water from the patrol car for the girls as per request from the Sgt. though the notepad. Pavele put his hand on Revs shoulder. “I’m so proud of you son. I might just cry” Pavele said sarcastically pretending to sound teary eyed. Rev just looked at the red panda and exhaled while shaking his head and then proceeded to walk on to the car. Rev felt horrible for doing what he just did, what he did was way out of protocol and near borderline abuse and worse, criminal. But Rev tried justifying it in his mind. “H-he, kidnapped those women, was… About to do those things to them!” Rev just needed some fresh air, he didn’t know what to do right now. Rev proceeded to open the trunk and get eight water bottles for the girls and for himself and Pavele. As Rev closed the trunk and proceeded to walk back to the scene. It was already past two minutes and Pavele had long stepped in to stop the girls beating on the mole rat. The mole rat was heavily battered and bruised. Blood staining his once white lab coat and dirt as well on the coat after being thrown to the ground by Rev just earlier. But just like Rev requested earlier, his face was in still somewhat recogniseable condition, and he had no broken bones. “Dang.” Rev muttered as he began offering the various women some water, all of them accepting the water. After this, Rev went over to the mole rat and began to pick him up. “Y-you monster!” Rev stood silent. “You’re the one to talk.” As Rev led the mole rat back to Pavele, unknown headlights came into the scene, not followed by any service lights and or sirens caused a little concern for the two. “Pav, stay here, i’ll go out and see who it is.” Pavele nodded and stayed behind as Rev began to walk towards the car. The vehicle's headlights were a little blinding, causing Rev to use his hand to shield as much as he can from the light hitting his eyes. Regardless, Rev still called out. “Excuse me, this is an active crime scene, i’m gonna have to ask you to place move your car!” Instead of the car moving, the cars engine turned off, the lights turned off and the car door began to open slowly. Barely able to register what was happening, Rev ran to the patrol car for cover, and reached for his gun and began to draw it while still calling out.
“Stay in the car! This is your last chance!” Rev said aiming his sidearm towards the cracked open door from the open car. Suddenly, a familiar voice called out “Officer Rev calm down. It’s me, Chief Christine.” Rev hearing this instantly holstered his sidearm and apologized. “Sorry chief, I didn’t know it was you! Or any mention of you coming onto the scene as a matter of fact.” Rev stepped away from the car and proceeded to walk towards the tall and powerful, yet easy going female wolf. “No, it’s my bad, I should have said something sooner.” After a few seconds of silence. The wolf broke the silence. “Listen, I know you’re not gonna like this one bit but, this case just became someone else’s now. We no longer have any jurisdiction any longer. The C.S.C are taking over.” Rev haring this, was a little taken back, this is the first time any sort of event has happened to the human. Let alone of that from an unknown organization. “I-i… Uh...” Rev trying to find some works, noticed the wolf proceeded to walk into the building, in which, the human jogged to catch up to. “I take you brought your camera and the sort?” Rev barely catching up nodded. “May I see it?” The chief asked. Rev not really much of a choice in this situation, handed it over. “Ahh, I see, always the one for getting as much as you could in terms of evidence. Sorry about this Rev.” Without warning, the wolf opened up the camera and took out the film, not only compromising the pictures took of the scene, but also destroying any chance of prosecuting the mole rat. Rev at shock stammered. “U-uh… Chief! With all due respect. What has gotten into you! That was evidence!” Immediately the wolf turned towards the human and proceeded to put her hand on his shoulder and give back his empty camera. “I’m sorry, but this is to protect you… From them.” While giving back the camera, she also took Revs notepad out of Revs chest pocket on his shirt. “Who? The… C.S.C or something like that?” Little to Revs knowledge, the shark from the group of women looked up in surprise at the mentioning of the C.S.C.
The wolf looked at the human and nodded. “W-who are these people?!?” Rev asked wanting to know. “That info is classified. Just know this Rev, you don’t want to get on their watch list, or bad side. They will be here soon. And they will ask you what you know, just tell them the truth, and tell them you have no evidence of what happened.” Rev still lost at the situation, just nodded in confirmation. “Good, I know this is all so sudden, but it’ll hopefully make sense one day.” The wolf proceeded to get out her phone and make a call. Rev, went back to Pavele. “Well, there goes all your evidence and all that.” Pavele exclaimed. Rev just exhaled. “I dunno man, i’ll find out who this C.S.C. group is, one way or another. Just right now, i wanna go home, and get my mind off all… this.” Pavele nodded “Agreed.” A few minutes later and additional units, both local and from that group mentioned earlier arrived to the scene to do their respective jobs.
-15 minutes later-
As Rev stood next to Pavele at the car albeit, on his phone. Watched the various hazmat crews clean up and contain the slime substance, and the various paramedics tend to the victims of today, to just the overall buzz at the scene, the human was just in a slight trance of just how everything is just moving along until a voice came along ending Rev’s train of thought. “Excuse me, are you officer Rev?” The french sounding accent was enough to catch Revs attention and bring him to the body that belonged to the voice. “Y-yeah, that’s me.” Rev responded. “Hi, im Lenora Mellora, i’m from the C.S.C. I’m here to ask you some questions. Is that okay?” The sergal said holding out her hand for shake. “S-sure.” Rev responded buy reaching out his own hand while looking at her imposing 6’6 height and almost yellow glowing eyes, and shook the sergals furry, but well kept , clawed hand, only further emphasised when the claws from the large hand sunk their way into the humans smaller but fleshy hand, not enough to cut or pierce, but to remind Rev, not that he needed any, on what the kind of crowd he was dealing with at the end of the day. Before Rev could say anything, Pavele spoke up.“Well. You two have fun! I’ll be sure to take good care of the car!” Rev confused on how Pavele was gonna drive as he had the keys, reached for them only to find them not there. As if on cue Pavele held up the car keys and proceeded to get into the car and start it up. Rev in shock, could only watch as the red panda backed up the patrol car and proceeded to drive off until the tailights turned into the darkness.
All Rev could do was exhale. “Well, he’s sure something.” Rev hearing this turned around to face the sergal again. “Yeah.” Rev said defeated. The sergal patted Revs shoulder “You ready to begin?” Rev thought about all that happened to day, from the women, to the slime, to the crazy mole rat, to the chief destroying his evidence, to pavele leaving him in the dust, to the seventh missing victim and where they could be, and what might happen to them was all about. And to now, this new group coming out of nowhere taking over this case to begin with. Rev had a lot on his mind, but regardless inhaled and replied. “Yeap, lets go.” As the sergal nodded and began leading Rev to a place for them to talk, Rev knew, this was gonna be one heck of week, and a pile of paperwork later.
Woo nelly, my longest story yet XD
Hope you all enjoyed! :D
Based off this comic: Fluent in Slime (VERY NSFW) http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20052769/ By: Snowleandre
SnowLeandre
All Characters belong to their respective owners!
Rev, Chief: Me
Pavele, Tori, Lenora:
DrPossibly
Tempest:
tempest_kitty
Bleu:
Megan Bryar
Grace:
Grace Bryar
Aya:
bigbadwolfie
Mentioned Burr
redburr
Night Time
2100 Hours
Sounds of metal bashing on wood over and over again, trying to get into a building. Sounds of splinters and angry grunts being formed filled the quiet nighttime air. Screams and pleas for mercy followed through, all going ignored. Outbursts of pain and sounds of violent beatings and struggles echoed within the building, followed by silence. Fifteen minutes later, a lone patrol cars siren filled the air, foreshadowing of what was to come soon from the event that just happened a few moments ago.
Heading towards the destination given by dispatch, The loud droning sound of the sirens and the roaring engine of the patrol car being nothing but all they heard, officer Rev and officer Pavele, trying to break the monotony. Begin to give guess on what happened, and why. “You know, i’m guessing it’s because of a personal vendetta and all that, probably money and the sort.” Rev went first. “Well, i’m guessing it was to rescue someone how about that?” Pavele retorted. “Okay! Wanna bet on it? I got a twenty on me.” Rev suggested for the fun of it. “Sure, why not.” Both the human and red panda shook on it. Cementing the bet, making it official. “Five minutes till we reach the area. We’re gonna see who's right soon.” Rev said jokingly, almost missing a turn in the darkness, turning last minute to catch it, making the tires squeal from the forces involved. The turn, in this case was only dimly lit from the surrounding streetlights, and the cars own headlights as well. “Woah, calm down there evil-knievel, we don’t want to end up being a scene ourselves, On the way to a scene” Pavele said unusually calm, and sarcastic as usual. “Hah, you right.” Recovering the vehicle from their sudden maneuver. “Alright, we’re here.” Rev said turning off the siren, and just leaving on the lights. “I’ll tape off the perimeter, You can...” Rev was about to finish, but then was cut off from Pavele.
“Nah, you go ahead, i’ll tape off the area, you did respond to the call after all. It only makes sense Rev. ” Pavele getting out of the car, going to get the tape from the trunk. Rev, just sitting there deciding if what just happened was just Pavele being lazy, being passive aggressive, or both, grabbed and slung his camera around his neck and got out of the car, looking at pavele digging in the trunk for the tape, proceeded to make his way towards the building, with the freshly opened up wall as the humans entrance, opposed from the locked wooden door just a few feet behind him; into something out of an insane nightmare. “This is Officer Rev! Anyone here? I’m coming in!” Rev shouted into the building. “You really think if anyone was there, they’d actually call out? Especially a bad guy?” Pavele said loudly while taping off a sizeable area for them and possible backup units to use. “It’s protocall man. C’mon.” Rev replied slightly annoyed ”Just saying.” Pavele said taping off the last of the lines of tape. “Well, whatever the case, I see some others inside, i’m going in.” Rev said pulling out his standard issued sidearm. Waiting no longer, went inside. Careful to not get caught on the splinters from the hole in the wall, Rev noticed it was only a one story tall building, and a small one at that, maybe two rooms by the look of it, in this case, a wooden door. Rev stopped and looked around in the room, and saw a what appeared to be a mole rat, in a lab coat, barely responding. Rev seeing this immediately holstered his firearm, and proceeded to tend to the mole rat. “Sir, what happened? You’re badly hurt.” Rev asked the mole rat. “I… I… I just wanted to make… *cough* My… Rainbow colored slime girl squad...” The mole rat again fading out of consciousness. “What?” Rev asked out loud and verbally confused. “What on earth did he mean by that?” Rev, immediately going to his radio, called out. “Officer Rev here, We have a 10-52 over.” A few moments later. “Copy that, an ambulance is on the way, over” Rev, hearing this proceeded to turn around, and was immediately met with what looked like a metal machine, one that looked vacant, and with a tube dripping with pink slime.
Rev at a loss for words took his camera and focused a shot of the machine for later evidence to use. Getting closer to the machine, Rev closely inspected the tube leaking an unknown pinkish slime, the thing that mainly caught Revs attention. Looking at it, Rev didn’t want to touch it, but did what he could in the circumstances, take a picture, and did just that. Focusing on the tube dripping the unknown pink slimy substance, Rev got a clear picture of it, and proceeded to radio in the sudden change in situation. “Dispatch, also put out a bolo for a possible victim MIA, over.” Getting a confirmation from dispatch, Rev moved on. Warning Pavele of what was possibly in the area. “Yo Pav! Watch out, there’s some kind of unknown substance around here, watch out and don’t touch it man!” Rev, was waiting for some sort of confirmation, but got none, worrying the human. “Pav?” Rev called out again worried. “Rev… Come here man.” Pavele responded as if under some sort of spell. Rev wasting no time bursted through the door at the end of the room, connecting to the other room gun drawn. “Pav what’s wrong man?” Rev asked looking at the red panda all worried. “Turn around man...” Pavele responded monotonically not breaking his gaze away from what he was looking at. Rev walking up to Pavele hearing this was afraid to do so at first, but finally did so after a bit. “Okay? Wh- Oh my goodness.” Rev immediately fell silent as did pavele a bit ago. Strung across the small room were six machines, all with various bodies on them, affixed to them with straps and clear rubber tubes attached to the said bodies lower regions. All of the female variety, and all exposed to the world and in this case, to the two police officers, in more ways than one, so to speak. Rev noticed five of them to be a mix of various species, ranging from a husky, to a panther, to a few canines, except for one. One was of the marine variety, a shark. Rev had a fear of sharks, and so seeing her in addition of everything else they saw, made Rev completely break for a bit before regaining his composure.
“W-what the heck man… What is all this?” Rev trying to muster up the courage to take a picture of the scarring scene for evidences’ sake, but couldn't. “W-we need to get them out of those machines man.” Rev said. “Yeah… I’ll take one side, you take the other?” Pavele responded. “Sure.” Rev said finally managing to take a picture, albeit one; of the scene, and heading over to the nearest machine. “Alright let’s do this man!” Rev wasting no time began unbuckling the straps that held one of the victims to the machine. “Alright, let’s make this quick.” Pavele responded unbucking some straps as well with experience and finess, unknown to the human. Rev barely getting one victim out of the machine, helped her out of the machine and safely onto the floor. “One out of three done, moving onto the next! How bout’ you?” Pavele already done with the second one responded. “On the way to the third one.” Rev looked at the pandas progress and was amazed oh how fast pavele managed to get through the other two. “Dang! That was fast man!” Rev said in amazement. “Nothing to be amazed at, just lots of practice. Come on!” Pavele said with usual his deadpan tone. “You right. Lets go!” Rev said just finishing unbinding the second captive from the machine and helping them onto the floor safely. “Onto the third one on my end!” Rev responded to Pavele. “Third one almost out on my end as well here, this one’s a bit more complex though, kinda fitting being it’s a shark I suppose.” Pavele said usually deadpan, and a little bit sarcastically. Rev instantly turning around hearing the mentoning of a shark. Before Rev even managed to say a word, another sudden angry voice broke the already tense silence. Making both the human and red panda stop in their tracks. “You fools! My… My...” Both Rev and Pavele had their eyes fixed onto the mole rat, the same one Rev tended to earlier and slowly began reaching for their firearms, but even that was interrupted. “MY RAINBOW COLORED SLIME GIRL SQUAD!” Hearing this, both Rev and Pavele were taken back. “AHHHHHHH, NOT YET.” The mole out of nowhere, grabbed out a small remote, and proceeded to activate it. “THEY CAN STILL EXIST! MUHAHAHAHA” The mole rat proceeded to barely run off into the night away from the scene. With in a few seconds the machines in the room began to spur to life and began warming up and the pumps attached to them beginning to slowly to fire up to life and the various vats of slime began to slowly drain. Out of the six machines however, two were still attached to them. The shark Pavele was working on, and the panther Rev was working on as well. “Oh shoot. The machines are coming on! And that mole rat is getting away! Right now, he’s our only victim turned suspect!” Pavele managed to get some of the straps loosened on his end responded “I’m faster, i’ll go after him! You get these two out of the machines!” Pavele began to give chase to the mole rat. “You got it!”
Rev managing to get his third victim free and onto safety against a nearby wall along with the others, moved onto Paveles last victim, the shark. Rev turning around and was slightly frozen in fear, but seeing the slime slowly travel up the thankfully long clear tube, reminded Rev, his time as short and he had to get to work fast. Rev, mustering up his courage to barely face his fear, literally face to face; got to work and began to frantically untie the shark from her machine. Rev seeing the orange colored slime already halfway up the tube made him even more frantic then he already was. “Oh Frick.” Rev looking at the tube, and back to the shark, only to be met with a somewhat piercing glare. Rev began to feel more nervous and somewhat queasy. But he knew he had to get her out of there, and so, to buy some time, Rev took out a pocket knife and pierced a hole in the tube to buy some time, and began using the knife to cut the shackles off, something he wished he’d done sooner, and not at a time of urgency like this, something Rev himself laments for doing quite often. Only a few seconds have passed and the hole he poked in the tubing already gave way and the amount of slime being pumped the tube negated the hole, only resulting in a slow made mess of unknown slime. However, despite the act of buying time seem to have failed, Rev as indeed able to cut off the last of the restraints and barely manage to lift the large shark off the machine. However, Rev being only five foot four inches tall, and the shark feeling about six feet tall, maybe even more, had a lot of trouble doing so and, already having trouble with the others, wasn’t helping. Rev also trying desperately not to have his own face get buried in the completely bare upper chest region, and trying not to get the sharks sandpaper textured skin to tear his own off at the same time wasn’t helping either. However, Rev managed to get the shark off the machine, despite all odds, just barely in time to see the slime in the tube begin to overflow and spill out the top. The tube originally, intended for the shark, and by extension, the other unfortunate victims previous on the other machines thankfully taken off minutes ago.
“Alright bud” Rev said nervously trying to ease the shark onto the ground as he did the others. “Let’s get you onto- Wha-AAAAAAAAEAGH!” Rev, in the process of getting the shark onto the ground, accidently slipped on some of the slime on the ground, managing to keep his footing, but accidently dropping the shark a bit, getting his clothes and skin slightly grinded up from the sharks sandpaper like skin. “Aaaaergh... You okay mam?” Rev despite bleeding a little, still showed concern for the others first, than himself. The shark, a little lost, nodded her head in confirmation anyways. “Alright good, that’s all that matters.” Rev, still holding on to the shark, began helping her towards a wall where the others freed moments before, were all laid against to relax and recover. “Dispatch over.” Rev radioed in, after a few seconds the radio came alive. “This is dispatch, over” “This is officer Rev, officer Pavele is in current pursuit of a suspect; mole rat, dark colored fur, glasses, and was last seen wearing a lab coat. We are also gonna need a hazmat crew here at our location. Unknown colored liquids from various machines have been spilt, their current contents unknown. Additional medical assistance also needed as well six more additional victims, over.” Rev finally making his way towards the other females against the wall, lowered the shark safely with them, hand still on this radio, looking at the females him and pavele just secured waiting for a response. “Copy that officer. Additional paramedics inbound, hazmat put on alert and an APB has been put out, over.” “Copy, thanks dispatch.” Rev responded, and shifted his focus on the ladies on the wall. “Are all you ladies in any other pain or hanging in there?” Rev was bestowed upon nothing but silence, but their looks and body behavior, said otherwise. “Hmm… Can any of you talk?” Rev asked politely. “All of them shook their heads” Rev nodded in agreement, and proceeded to take out his notepad and pen to give one of them. “Here, if you’d like, on your own will. Take this pen and notepad, write down your name, and sum up what happened, if you can. Then flip the page, and pass along the notepad to the other. I’m gonna head back to my car can get you all some blankets. You poor ladies must be freezing right now.” As Rev began to go back to the patrol car, the ladies all nodded at Rev’s request. As Rev made his way back to the patrol car, Rev radioed in to Pavele. “Hey Pavele, you’ve been quiet, any status on your situation?” Rev getting no response, from the radio, began to page again while opening the trunk to the patrol car. “Pav-” Rev was interrupted when a familiar voice called out to him, making him stop.
“Calm down Rev, im here. Little creeper was just a bit faster than I expected.” Pavele shouted towards Rev returning back to the scene. Rev, getting the box of emergency blankets out of the car, closed the trunk and responded back towards Pavele. “Well, I least i know you’re still alive!” Pavele responded with giving Rev the finger. Rev chuckled at this and made his way back inside, back to the women. “Okay ladies, let’s get you all covered up yeah?” Rev began handing each female a blanket, making his way down the group, with the last one, being the shark. Rev reaching her, met again with her piercing gaze, gulped his throat, and gave the shark the blanket, while the shark returned the favor, and gave Rev back his notepad. “Thank you.” Rev said, to the shark, nodding in both appreciation and confirmation, and putting the blanket over herself, as did the others did as well. Rev holding his notepad saw Pavele and the handcuffed mole rat walking into the room, began to look though it, starting with the first one entered in:
Tempest - “I just happened to be running by this area one day, just minding my own business. Next thing you know, there was something that caught my eye, almost hypnotic it was a little tiny little spinner toy, it looked interesting. I went over to look at it, got caught up looking at it. Everything else was a blur, but I remember being here for the time being, on this machine. Embarrassed really. There was a few other females here as well. Thank you very much, for rescuing me.”
Bleu - “I joined my friend in her taking an offer for some temporary help, just wanted to make sure she was safe. We both got to this building, some creepy person grabbed my friend and injected her with something, then next thing you know before I could react, he got me as well. I later woke up seeing my friend across from me, along with a few others in the same situation. Out of nowhere, loud crashing, then screams. Then, your partner saved me. Tell him I said thank you.”
Grace - “There was an ad online for a few, temporary volunteer help for some research. The pay sounded nice, so I took the offer. We both arrived, greeted to a freak with glasses injecting me. Things went dark, last thing i saw, was him grab my friend. I woke up here, unable to talk. Thank you for rescuing us.”
Aya - “Sergeant Hardacre. I’m the Husky. Last I know I was on patrol. Doing paperwork and waiting for any calls. It was a slow night. I thought I heard someone near my car and… Well, that’s all I remember. What day is it? How long have we been missing? Can you bring us something to drink? I’ve got a headache and aching for some revenge”
“Tori- I came home from work one day, really tired and all that. Next thing you know, I wake up here, attached to this machine and all that, next thing you know. Loud crashes, and screaming. A little later, you and your partner come in, freeing us one by one. You saved me, and in the process, got sanded by me. Sorry about that hun.”
Reading all of this, Rev immediately felt a little at ease with the shark around, after she apologized for earlier, and noticed all but one wrote in the notepad, and it was the dark furred canine with red eyes looking bored of the situation at hand. Rev also immediately noticed one of them was a supposed officer, reported missing a few days prior. Rev immediately looked up and saw the now confirmed whereabouts of the missing officer and immediately reaching for his radio. “Dispatch, this is officer Rev again, I can confirm the status of the missing officer Sergeant Hardacre. She is currently alive and...Safe, so to speak. Here, at the scene. Over.” Rev began to walk towards pavele when the radio buzzed to life. “Copy that. The police station has been notified. Over.” “Thanks” Rev responded. Rev met up with Pavele and the mole rat now in their custody. Rev trying not to lash out at the mole rat for willingly do something so disgusting.
“What is your name?” Rev barely said though his teeth. A few seconds of silence passed as the mole rat eventually spoke up. “I… I am Dr. Neferio Ipping! The one who’s dreams you just crushed from your interventions!” As Rev used every ounce of willpower to keep from him taking a few swings at this creep, Rev exhaled and began writing down the mole rats testimony in his notepad. “So, how would… No. Never mind that. why. Why, did you do it. All… This? Rev asked. “Well, it’s simple, i wanted my rainbow slime girl squad to live! And that slime YOU happened to just haphazardly let spill on the floor… Was my way of doing that!” Rev looked behind him to see the machines still pumping their various colored slimes. “OH FOR FU-” Rev cut himself off and began feeling though the mole rats lab coat and eventually pockets until he found the transmitter for the machines. “H-hey! That’s mine you don’t have the right!” Rev pressed the button on the device, shutting down the machines. “Shut up. After what you attempted to do here and tried to get away from, I have every right to do so. Creep.” Rev got his notepad out again then proceeded to continue asking the mole rat. “For this rainbow girl squad and all that, how is that supposed to work? It's just different colored slimes.” The mole rat looked at the human for a bit and then laughed. “Is that what you think? All this just slime? No. How about, DNA coded, nanobot infused attitude activated mood slime!” Rev stopped writing things down hearing this. “What on earth are you saying?” The mole rat exhaled. “What im saying you plebeian is that, the colored slime has a purpose… Red for inspiration, Orange for determination, Yellow for joy, Green for hope, Blue for volition, indigo for loyalty and purple for… lust” The mole rat smiled deviously. “Why are you smiling?”
“Lets just say… Before she was taken away, and you two got here, stopping the other six. A certain… Snow leopard already had a good amount put into her. I don't know whats gonna happen to her, or... I-if anything at all but, regardless though, I WIN! HAHAHAHAHA” Rev looked in horror to the other room he came in through where the seventh machine was, leaking purple slime. Rev put it all together in his head and immediately lost his composure. Rev proceeded to throw his pen and notepad to the floor and proceeded to grab the mole rat, surprising even Pavele, and kicked out one of the mole rats legs making him fall only to be held up by his collar by the now angry human. “WHAT DID YOU DO? WHAT TO YOU MEAN IF ANYTHING HAPPENS?!? YOU BETTER ANSWER ME YOU FREAK!” As Rev was about to beat down the mole rat himself the radio came to life, it was dispatch. “Officer Pavele and Rev, first responders are ETA five minutes. Over” Pavele acknowledged but Rev didn’t. “Five minutes?” Rev said to Pavele while looking at the six girls they rescued. “Yeah. Why?” Pavele responded. Rev looked at the red panda with a look only Pavele himself knew. “Aaaahhh, was wondering when you’d stop your whole goody-two-shoes-by-the-book behavior Rev.” Rev threw the mole rat in front of the ladies he tried to do unspeakable things to just earlier. Rev looked at the Sgt. in the crowd of women and slightly nodded, this alone was enough for them to both know what was about to go down. “Ladies. Two minutes. No broken bones. Save the face for identification later. Everything else… Have at it.”
As Rev began to turn around, the last thing he was was the Sgt. getting up and running at the mole rat kicking him furiously in the stomach, before the other ladies getting up and joining in. What followed was the sounds of beatings and the screams of the mad scientist. Rev passed by Pavele to get some water from the patrol car for the girls as per request from the Sgt. though the notepad. Pavele put his hand on Revs shoulder. “I’m so proud of you son. I might just cry” Pavele said sarcastically pretending to sound teary eyed. Rev just looked at the red panda and exhaled while shaking his head and then proceeded to walk on to the car. Rev felt horrible for doing what he just did, what he did was way out of protocol and near borderline abuse and worse, criminal. But Rev tried justifying it in his mind. “H-he, kidnapped those women, was… About to do those things to them!” Rev just needed some fresh air, he didn’t know what to do right now. Rev proceeded to open the trunk and get eight water bottles for the girls and for himself and Pavele. As Rev closed the trunk and proceeded to walk back to the scene. It was already past two minutes and Pavele had long stepped in to stop the girls beating on the mole rat. The mole rat was heavily battered and bruised. Blood staining his once white lab coat and dirt as well on the coat after being thrown to the ground by Rev just earlier. But just like Rev requested earlier, his face was in still somewhat recogniseable condition, and he had no broken bones. “Dang.” Rev muttered as he began offering the various women some water, all of them accepting the water. After this, Rev went over to the mole rat and began to pick him up. “Y-you monster!” Rev stood silent. “You’re the one to talk.” As Rev led the mole rat back to Pavele, unknown headlights came into the scene, not followed by any service lights and or sirens caused a little concern for the two. “Pav, stay here, i’ll go out and see who it is.” Pavele nodded and stayed behind as Rev began to walk towards the car. The vehicle's headlights were a little blinding, causing Rev to use his hand to shield as much as he can from the light hitting his eyes. Regardless, Rev still called out. “Excuse me, this is an active crime scene, i’m gonna have to ask you to place move your car!” Instead of the car moving, the cars engine turned off, the lights turned off and the car door began to open slowly. Barely able to register what was happening, Rev ran to the patrol car for cover, and reached for his gun and began to draw it while still calling out.
“Stay in the car! This is your last chance!” Rev said aiming his sidearm towards the cracked open door from the open car. Suddenly, a familiar voice called out “Officer Rev calm down. It’s me, Chief Christine.” Rev hearing this instantly holstered his sidearm and apologized. “Sorry chief, I didn’t know it was you! Or any mention of you coming onto the scene as a matter of fact.” Rev stepped away from the car and proceeded to walk towards the tall and powerful, yet easy going female wolf. “No, it’s my bad, I should have said something sooner.” After a few seconds of silence. The wolf broke the silence. “Listen, I know you’re not gonna like this one bit but, this case just became someone else’s now. We no longer have any jurisdiction any longer. The C.S.C are taking over.” Rev haring this, was a little taken back, this is the first time any sort of event has happened to the human. Let alone of that from an unknown organization. “I-i… Uh...” Rev trying to find some works, noticed the wolf proceeded to walk into the building, in which, the human jogged to catch up to. “I take you brought your camera and the sort?” Rev barely catching up nodded. “May I see it?” The chief asked. Rev not really much of a choice in this situation, handed it over. “Ahh, I see, always the one for getting as much as you could in terms of evidence. Sorry about this Rev.” Without warning, the wolf opened up the camera and took out the film, not only compromising the pictures took of the scene, but also destroying any chance of prosecuting the mole rat. Rev at shock stammered. “U-uh… Chief! With all due respect. What has gotten into you! That was evidence!” Immediately the wolf turned towards the human and proceeded to put her hand on his shoulder and give back his empty camera. “I’m sorry, but this is to protect you… From them.” While giving back the camera, she also took Revs notepad out of Revs chest pocket on his shirt. “Who? The… C.S.C or something like that?” Little to Revs knowledge, the shark from the group of women looked up in surprise at the mentioning of the C.S.C.
The wolf looked at the human and nodded. “W-who are these people?!?” Rev asked wanting to know. “That info is classified. Just know this Rev, you don’t want to get on their watch list, or bad side. They will be here soon. And they will ask you what you know, just tell them the truth, and tell them you have no evidence of what happened.” Rev still lost at the situation, just nodded in confirmation. “Good, I know this is all so sudden, but it’ll hopefully make sense one day.” The wolf proceeded to get out her phone and make a call. Rev, went back to Pavele. “Well, there goes all your evidence and all that.” Pavele exclaimed. Rev just exhaled. “I dunno man, i’ll find out who this C.S.C. group is, one way or another. Just right now, i wanna go home, and get my mind off all… this.” Pavele nodded “Agreed.” A few minutes later and additional units, both local and from that group mentioned earlier arrived to the scene to do their respective jobs.
-15 minutes later-
As Rev stood next to Pavele at the car albeit, on his phone. Watched the various hazmat crews clean up and contain the slime substance, and the various paramedics tend to the victims of today, to just the overall buzz at the scene, the human was just in a slight trance of just how everything is just moving along until a voice came along ending Rev’s train of thought. “Excuse me, are you officer Rev?” The french sounding accent was enough to catch Revs attention and bring him to the body that belonged to the voice. “Y-yeah, that’s me.” Rev responded. “Hi, im Lenora Mellora, i’m from the C.S.C. I’m here to ask you some questions. Is that okay?” The sergal said holding out her hand for shake. “S-sure.” Rev responded buy reaching out his own hand while looking at her imposing 6’6 height and almost yellow glowing eyes, and shook the sergals furry, but well kept , clawed hand, only further emphasised when the claws from the large hand sunk their way into the humans smaller but fleshy hand, not enough to cut or pierce, but to remind Rev, not that he needed any, on what the kind of crowd he was dealing with at the end of the day. Before Rev could say anything, Pavele spoke up.“Well. You two have fun! I’ll be sure to take good care of the car!” Rev confused on how Pavele was gonna drive as he had the keys, reached for them only to find them not there. As if on cue Pavele held up the car keys and proceeded to get into the car and start it up. Rev in shock, could only watch as the red panda backed up the patrol car and proceeded to drive off until the tailights turned into the darkness.
All Rev could do was exhale. “Well, he’s sure something.” Rev hearing this turned around to face the sergal again. “Yeah.” Rev said defeated. The sergal patted Revs shoulder “You ready to begin?” Rev thought about all that happened to day, from the women, to the slime, to the crazy mole rat, to the chief destroying his evidence, to pavele leaving him in the dust, to the seventh missing victim and where they could be, and what might happen to them was all about. And to now, this new group coming out of nowhere taking over this case to begin with. Rev had a lot on his mind, but regardless inhaled and replied. “Yeap, lets go.” As the sergal nodded and began leading Rev to a place for them to talk, Rev knew, this was gonna be one heck of week, and a pile of paperwork later.
Woo nelly, my longest story yet XD
Hope you all enjoyed! :D
Based off this comic: Fluent in Slime (VERY NSFW) http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20052769/ By: Snowleandre
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Megan BryarGrace:
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This is a pretty interesting story. It's neat to see an expansion on Leandre's original story, and an exploration of what might have happened to the other girls hooked to the machines, and I thought you took it in an interesting direction. Especially at the end there, where you left plenty of room for all sorts of future intrigue. I thought the roles were well balanced, with each one of the girls getting a fairly equal amount of time devoted to her. I liked Rev's interaction with the shark and his attempts to free her while overcoming his phobia. It was a nice sort of humanizing moment, I thought. The mole rat mad scientist sort of stole the show, I thought, but that's by no means a bad thing. Mad scientists are more fun when they're over the top like that. All in all I thought you did well with it. Thanks for sharing and thanks for including Bleu in your story.
Thank you very much! I love to imagine what the aftermath may have been after a main characters events leave the scene, and in this case the other six women attached to the machine and all that!
It was fun to imagine what most of the characters would speak in their own words and how they'd interact, as well as getting you and the others to put their own testimony's in. And indeed I left this all pretty open for future stories to come! ^^
It was fun to imagine what most of the characters would speak in their own words and how they'd interact, as well as getting you and the others to put their own testimony's in. And indeed I left this all pretty open for future stories to come! ^^
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