Well... apart from the 'man in the moon' I can honestly say this poem is one of the most naturistic, metophorical peice of poetry I'm going to add into my favroits. Hell, I like this as much as I like Edger Alan Poe's "The Raven". And I spend all week memorising that.... I love this poem.

Well done ^..^

--Your Sorta Critic But Not For This One Because Hey, What Was There To Critisize--

Fuzzy

I'm glad you liked it as much as you did. We were trying to be metaphoric when we wrote it. One of those things where we deliberately made it vague so people could find their own meanings in it while at the same time we tried to be, er, poetic in describing it.

Anyways, thanks again

Hiya curly! Just going through your old stuff. I still think your poems are much more deep and meaningful. Mine are usually just soppy love poems... >.<" Still, I'll have to read this through a few times before I get the meaning down.

Well if you find meaning in it then let that be your own. Me and my friend wrote this and each line a has its own little view on life. and then some of the lines just sounded cool ^^

Well if you find meaning in it then let that be your own. Me and my friend wrote this and each line a has its own little view on life. and then some of the lines just sounded cool ^^