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Let's just say he's had a few bad experiences with the Istrala.
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UPDATE: I made a few adjustments to the page, thanks to a few suggestions in the comments section. I took the advice to heart and decided to touch up the page as best I could. I hope this is an improvement!
I moved Rohan back a little bit from the arrow on a couple of panels, since as
Tydrian Xion rightly pointed out, the arrow needs a bit of travel distance to gain a proper amount of velocity. I agree that although a long bow could absolutely be lethal at point blank, couple of extra feet from the bow really does make all of the difference.
skyfighter64 gave me a couple of corrections about the hand and arrow positioning. You would think with the fact that I've DONE archery and in fact own a longbow that I would have noticed these details. I blame the deadline, personally.
Anyway, thanks for all of the help, you guys!
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UPDATE 2: I just realized that the paladin's quiver strap (the diagonal brawn thing) was going in inconsistent directions on the page. I didn't notice it until I was working on page 18 and realized I'd been pointing it the wrong way on the entire page. Go me. XP
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I suppose it's worth mentioning the the Paladin did indeed intentionally miss Rohan on the eighth panel. I'm PRETTY sure it's clear from the scene, but just in case it wasn't.
Back to drawing humans again. I was actually surprised how expressive this Paladin is when it comes down to it. Granted, it's hard to be stoic after fighting demons all night and losing a town in the process, but still.
It took a LOT of work to find a decent sort of text to represent Rohan's speech, but I think this one fits the bill pretty nicely.
That's it for now. Hope you liked the page, guys!
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Page 18: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/27803141/
Let's just say he's had a few bad experiences with the Istrala.
---
UPDATE: I made a few adjustments to the page, thanks to a few suggestions in the comments section. I took the advice to heart and decided to touch up the page as best I could. I hope this is an improvement!
I moved Rohan back a little bit from the arrow on a couple of panels, since as
Tydrian Xion rightly pointed out, the arrow needs a bit of travel distance to gain a proper amount of velocity. I agree that although a long bow could absolutely be lethal at point blank, couple of extra feet from the bow really does make all of the difference.
skyfighter64 gave me a couple of corrections about the hand and arrow positioning. You would think with the fact that I've DONE archery and in fact own a longbow that I would have noticed these details. I blame the deadline, personally. Anyway, thanks for all of the help, you guys!
---
UPDATE 2: I just realized that the paladin's quiver strap (the diagonal brawn thing) was going in inconsistent directions on the page. I didn't notice it until I was working on page 18 and realized I'd been pointing it the wrong way on the entire page. Go me. XP
---
I suppose it's worth mentioning the the Paladin did indeed intentionally miss Rohan on the eighth panel. I'm PRETTY sure it's clear from the scene, but just in case it wasn't.
Back to drawing humans again. I was actually surprised how expressive this Paladin is when it comes down to it. Granted, it's hard to be stoic after fighting demons all night and losing a town in the process, but still.
It took a LOT of work to find a decent sort of text to represent Rohan's speech, but I think this one fits the bill pretty nicely.
That's it for now. Hope you liked the page, guys!
DA archive: https://ryusuta.deviantart.com/gall.....ht-Angel-Comic
FA archive: https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery.....oonlight-Angel
Support this comic on Patreon!
https://www.patreon.com/ryusuta
Special thanks to:
-PATRONS-
Ashley Robbins
Corbyn Prower
-GOLD TIER PATRONS-
Izzy Jones
Noctus Nightflare
Category All / Transformation
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Size 1500 x 2181px
File Size 1.56 MB
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That archer is actually a little TOO close range for the arrow to be an effective projectile. XD;
The arrow gets all of its power and momentum from the bowstring when it is loosed. If the target is too close and the arrow hits before the string returns to its straight and neutral position, then the arrow cannot get all of the power it should get.
The arrow gets all of its power and momentum from the bowstring when it is loosed. If the target is too close and the arrow hits before the string returns to its straight and neutral position, then the arrow cannot get all of the power it should get.
Given the insane draw weight of the bow and the snap back, that's still going to be anywhere from 50-150 pounds of focused pressure at point-blank. An arrow with a hunting tip can ABSOLUTELY hurt or even kill at point blank. And when he steps back to about two to three feet away, it would easily be enough to add plenty of force to it.
**Dragon is broken, please reboot**
So...essentially, he still hears him talking human language, but it sorta gets....auto-translated? Like, when IRL you learn after a long while to not translate whatever you hear and read into your native language, but you simply grasp the meaning of the learned language.
So...essentially, he still hears him talking human language, but it sorta gets....auto-translated? Like, when IRL you learn after a long while to not translate whatever you hear and read into your native language, but you simply grasp the meaning of the learned language.
I just started by assuming Rohan's second speech bubble was a repeat of what the archer said. From that, I figured out all the letters in "demon tongued," and just looked for any identical characters in the other speech bubbles. From there, it was only mildly difficult to guess and translate the other letters into something that made sense., and in turn what Rohan was saying.
I mean this only as constructive criticism, but when an archer is holding a bow, the thumb wraps around the back part of the handle in order to keep the bow from falling out of the Archer's hand. Also the arrow goes on the other side of the bow, so when drawing the bow, the natural positioning of the hand lets the arrow rest on top. When you bring it up to aim, the arrow rests either on a notch on the bow itself, or the archer's glove/fingers and the bow.
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