[commission] Arcane Misstep 6/6
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Bluedraconicknight ! Go give 'em a great big hug, if you like this piece!
AIR! Her head pierced the surface, and allowed that precious resource back into her much, MUCH larger lungs. Her barreled chest, twice the size her whole body had been not a moment or two ago, heaved and flexed.
Some moments passed. Her mind tried to clear itself of panic, but there were some... problems. Still looking straight up, this clearly was not the sky she had been under. And her eyes felt different. And... were in the wrong place on her head. And her head felt different. And... everything. Everything was wrong.
Slowly, with a neck much longer than it should have been, she awkwardly bent her head downward.
...
This was no garden pond. She could see a horizon. Clouds. Birds she had never known before. Was this... was this an ocean? She'd never even seen an ocean before! Where was she?
WHAT was she?
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Bluedraconicknight ! Go give 'em a great big hug, if you like this piece!AIR! Her head pierced the surface, and allowed that precious resource back into her much, MUCH larger lungs. Her barreled chest, twice the size her whole body had been not a moment or two ago, heaved and flexed.
Some moments passed. Her mind tried to clear itself of panic, but there were some... problems. Still looking straight up, this clearly was not the sky she had been under. And her eyes felt different. And... were in the wrong place on her head. And her head felt different. And... everything. Everything was wrong.
Slowly, with a neck much longer than it should have been, she awkwardly bent her head downward.
...
This was no garden pond. She could see a horizon. Clouds. Birds she had never known before. Was this... was this an ocean? She'd never even seen an ocean before! Where was she?
WHAT was she?
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Category Artwork (Digital) / Transformation
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 877 x 1240px
File Size 2.92 MB
simply magnificent and magical, both in the sequence and in the selection of colors, in addition to the amazing anatomy. I really liked this ending, the colors of the clouds and the infinite sea.
Nose others, but to me it gives me a feeling of loneliness, surpassed before endless views, but warm welcome with the sunset tones and overcome with imposing clouds engulfing the sky .... Of course, also on the sensation of incungluencia and confucion of the magician * cof cof *.
It is to see that and also to feel the sensation of being lost, together with the joy and magnificent scenery.
ps: I may have spent a little while describing why I like it, but when I start writing, I write everything that comes to mind XD.
ps2: write with the help of a translator, I apologize if there are spelling and grammar.
Nose others, but to me it gives me a feeling of loneliness, surpassed before endless views, but warm welcome with the sunset tones and overcome with imposing clouds engulfing the sky .... Of course, also on the sensation of incungluencia and confucion of the magician * cof cof *.
It is to see that and also to feel the sensation of being lost, together with the joy and magnificent scenery.
ps: I may have spent a little while describing why I like it, but when I start writing, I write everything that comes to mind XD.
ps2: write with the help of a translator, I apologize if there are spelling and grammar.
Thank you very much! And yes, I liked the contrast between the character's state/setting and the environment. A sense of beauty, loss and being lost, freedom, bewilderment, tossed together with a smidgen of being overwhelmed by rather intimidating circumstances. Thanks for picking up on that :3
Maybe it does not go to the topic, but maybe this song could fit with this mystical landscape. At least one part, the second half of the song would be more if the black clouds in the background would be storm clouds, then sheltered again in the sea.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t1Q_kgxp4jA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t1Q_kgxp4jA
Hmm... true. Though it has some light storytelling in the description, it certainly sets the stage for an interesting odyssey, a journey where the character is pitched headlong into a world with no hint of why, or even where they are now. Identity stripped, location unknown, in the middle of a deep ocean upon an alien planet... it has potential :3
Thank you very much! :D
It's certainly an interesting premise for a story, but the character belongs to someone else; I can't well write a story about her without that person's input or permission. Still, it's an idea for the "rainy day" bucket of unwritten stories, so I'll keep it in mind ;)
It's certainly an interesting premise for a story, but the character belongs to someone else; I can't well write a story about her without that person's input or permission. Still, it's an idea for the "rainy day" bucket of unwritten stories, so I'll keep it in mind ;)
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