Very poignent, both emotionally and also with it's symmetry: very nice:)

Thank you very much for that.

you are very welcome, friend:) *hugs*

omg that was beautiful. i often find that the relationship some have with the parents is taken for granted. if my father would do something like that for me i would act much the same, even though hes never spoken to me in fifteen years... but that would make it seem more valuable i guess. i guess i should say to be happy with what you have, and make the best out of what you dont have.

Thank you very much for the kind comment.

I don't think I understand....

The idea behind the story is beautiful, as is the love between father and son. Thank you for sharing this.

However, I had to read the story a few times before understanding what was going on, because the story did not flow as well as it could.

Thanks. Yeah, made the arrangement of the wording rough; it's more thoughts being expressed, than telling a story.

Understood, but it makes it hard to follow.

I loved it :)

wonderful! ^_^