Hey, Retro. I think your hard work and determination to draw is FINALLY starting to pay off. This actually looks pretty good! I still think there's a thing or two you could do to bump your stuff up to the next level, but a lot of the anatomical inconsistencies in your work are starting to go away, and I daresay that I might not mind doing a trade with you or getting a commission some day!

That day isn't today, sadly, given that I am a broke person who owes others money, but... well, you get the point.