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![[Story] Dark Horizons - Chapter One](http://d.furaffinity.net/art/ryouki/stories/1488278723/1251779070.thumbnail.ryouki_chapter01.txt.gif "Click to change the View")
Chapter One of Dark Horizons. (Yay! my search for a title is over! I think...) If you can think of anything better, please let me know!
A novel cannot go without a little illustration, so eventually I will create original thumbnails for each chapter. For right now, thanks go to
BiancoNevica for the fractal.
As always, comments and critique are warmly welcomed. Enjoy!
EDIT: If you notice something repeating, let me know. There seems to have been some errors from when I made it a txt file. (I've caught and fixed three already.)
A novel cannot go without a little illustration, so eventually I will create original thumbnails for each chapter. For right now, thanks go to
BiancoNevica for the fractal.As always, comments and critique are warmly welcomed. Enjoy!
EDIT: If you notice something repeating, let me know. There seems to have been some errors from when I made it a txt file. (I've caught and fixed three already.)
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 80px
File Size 21.6 kB
well great job thus far. You have a talent for enviromental detail. Your characters also had good devlopment and personality. Also the plot has remained intreasting. Title ideas, well something involving dreams, adventure, darkness, light or sleep perhaps. Best of luck with the rest.
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