wow i would soooooo steal those shades and sell them XD

but forreak itz a good plot and lots of detail ............ detail is good!!

typo for real >.< cant spell today

Thank you so much for the comments. Working long and hard on Chapter 4 *wink*

Ooh, now this' something nice. True, there are a few things I could blather about, such as some further variation in the terms that are brought out here, maybe a few sentences changed around to not be so short...but I like this. The fact that this' different from what I usually see makes it all the better to read, and the fact that we have some real characters and schemes already set in place makes me look more than a little ahead towards what this series has to offer.