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Title kinda says it...
What do you think?
Just as a bit of backround, I'm pissed off at the world in general. My friend and I were talking about it and he said that he'd be the one to over take Hell and create the zombie apocalypse. I said I'd be the guy to make the virus. Then I thought, "What if Hell exist?"
This is the outcome of that.
Title should say "Upon" at the end.
What do you think?
Just as a bit of backround, I'm pissed off at the world in general. My friend and I were talking about it and he said that he'd be the one to over take Hell and create the zombie apocalypse. I said I'd be the guy to make the virus. Then I thought, "What if Hell exist?"
This is the outcome of that.
Title should say "Upon" at the end.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 109px
File Size 2 kB
Well philsophey wise its thrown out the window. However alot of awesome ideas that could defintley be expanded into a really good full story. So alot of potential. Kind of a seriouse look at undeath with a touch of unseriouse irony. I enjoy the concepts and the run in with Hitler was quite humorouse.
Well, the unserious irony wasn't my intention, but I'm glad even my most angry writings have a funny aspect to them.
That's normally how I do things. I look at everything with a different point of view from everyone else. I look at how it's not rather than how it is. The things that run through my mind...if only I could write them all.
Can you explain what you mean by "philosophy-wise it's thrown out the window"?
That's normally how I do things. I look at everything with a different point of view from everyone else. I look at how it's not rather than how it is. The things that run through my mind...if only I could write them all.
Can you explain what you mean by "philosophy-wise it's thrown out the window"?
Well there’s a lot of philosophies out there, and some are a lot stronger ideal wise in presentation then others. So the philosophy of the world and universe your story is conveying is greatly overshadowed and destroyed by some of these other ones. It has nothing to do about your story or you really, just an observing of the philosophical voice presented. No big deal, I don’t think this is much of a work of Aristotle, I shouldn’t have said anything on the subject whatsoever it wasn’t a necessary comment of much help or use. Thus I apologize.
No need to apologize at all. I love a good discussion. Any chance to learn something new is exciting for me.
And I understand what you are saying. It makes since. Granted this is a fictional story. Philosophy wasn't on my mind when I wrote it. I just hate religion and thought, "What if they were all wrong?"
Coming up with different views of things as such is a great way to write in my opinion, but again, it is a fictional story and not meant to be presented as fact so the discussion of philosophy can be brought in.
And any comment, so long as it's not "This is stupid" or similar, is a good comment. You actually gave me an idea for a story concept by explaining what you meant. So I must thank you.
And I understand what you are saying. It makes since. Granted this is a fictional story. Philosophy wasn't on my mind when I wrote it. I just hate religion and thought, "What if they were all wrong?"
Coming up with different views of things as such is a great way to write in my opinion, but again, it is a fictional story and not meant to be presented as fact so the discussion of philosophy can be brought in.
And any comment, so long as it's not "This is stupid" or similar, is a good comment. You actually gave me an idea for a story concept by explaining what you meant. So I must thank you.
Really? Not as dark as you were expecting? Wow...I read this and think "DEATH!!!!" I guess it's just because of how I felt when I read it.
But I think I am going to expand upon it just a bit. If not make it an actually story that I will never finish. I say that because I never finish my stories. That and I'm working on a story still with
MetroidBob. Don't want to steal my attentions away from that one.
But I think I am going to expand upon it just a bit. If not make it an actually story that I will never finish. I say that because I never finish my stories. That and I'm working on a story still with
MetroidBob. Don't want to steal my attentions away from that one.
Oh...I guess "DEATH!!!" is a private joke.
I don't view death as dark either. That's just something I say. Though you probably are right about the concepts of dark being different. I understand what you mean, though I couldn't explain it myself either.
And what I meant by "How I felt when I read it" was I was pissed off. Reading over it again, just seems like a documentary to me. Doesn't seem evil or dark by any means. It's amazing what your mood can do to the things you read.
I don't view death as dark either. That's just something I say. Though you probably are right about the concepts of dark being different. I understand what you mean, though I couldn't explain it myself either.
And what I meant by "How I felt when I read it" was I was pissed off. Reading over it again, just seems like a documentary to me. Doesn't seem evil or dark by any means. It's amazing what your mood can do to the things you read.
I can see a new name for this story 'Upon a Deathumentary'
yes i have seen peoples moods swing from happy bubbles type to down on deaths door and what they write certainly reflects that as does what you read. its all interpretation. your backgroud, your emotion, your intelegence, your learnt responses all influence how you respond to what you see and hear and experiece in any story or prose etc.
Its a rich tapestry
yes i have seen peoples moods swing from happy bubbles type to down on deaths door and what they write certainly reflects that as does what you read. its all interpretation. your backgroud, your emotion, your intelegence, your learnt responses all influence how you respond to what you see and hear and experiece in any story or prose etc.
Its a rich tapestry
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