Inked version of page two. Things have been smoothed out a lot before the inking was done. As with the first, the dialog is only in pencil so my colorist will know where to set it. And, of course, to read.

Pane 1: One such Kiyrie was StormCloud. She was young compared to others who acted as scouts, with a bubbly personality. She had natural speed and grace, and the cunning to avoid the hunters with ease. Only she was brave enough to live among the other races in their towns. She was beautiful as she was brave but she feared only one hunter...

Pane 2: ... the dragon-morph known only as Drake. He was considered the best among the hyunitarri, able to sense and smell the kiyrie no matter how they hid. Eventually, the kiyrie's mindlink helped them to learn his tricks and avoid capture, making his catches fewer and fewer over time.