Super cute! I like the thin lines, actually ^^

Thank you! ^^ and do you prefer them over my typical lineart? Ive been debating which looks better as a finish product haha, like... i want to advance further in making my art appear more “finished”

That's a tricky question, actually. I LOVE your style as is, because it feels like it hold some personal flare to it, where as this may be cleaner, but almost feels like it has no... personality? Not like in a bad sense, but in the sense that it doesn't feel like a moosh art. I hope that wasn't harsh D: I personally love this style as well, but I adore your "old" style, or "style A".

Not harsh at all! I just figured my thicker lines were much more messy? Wasnt sure if that was appealling to others ; ; because I want to further progress in my art where I can feel its a solid piece, but I appreciate the critique!! Wasnt sure what people thought when they see my art haha ^^

Either way, I adore your art n.n I'm glad you didn't take it personally. In the end I think it'll just be a preference thing, but as long as you're happy with what you're producing, I guarantee it'll show in the overall quality.

She came out super cute.

Thank you so much! I love drawing her ; ;

I love the way you did her fingers the look super cute^.^ and I think the thin lines look nice though i still like your original style most

Ive been on the line of how I want to do hands because i think bigger fingers/more doggo like are much more cute in my style and more fitting because I still like the whole "more animal than human" type stuff, but I'm glad other people approve of the way I've been doing fingers now!!

And you like the thin lines better? im quite surprised how many people prefer the thicker lines over thinner haha, i thought my thick lines were super duper messy

Hehe yeah I like the bigger fingers they just look super cute and like you said keep that animal feel to the char! But hehe yeah I think I like the old way best^.^ but do what you like most all in all your style is still super cute! Though with her wings you could say they are stretch too bat wings are more of a membrane so maybe when she lifts her arms over her head they pull closer to her arm or are flexable enough she can wear shirts with out any problems?

ug, see I'm use to drawing bird OC's cuz their wings can be extensions of their hand or be their hand, but i dont want her wings to like... hinder her ability to move? ug idk xD wings be hard!

tell me about it>~< it’s a harder cocept when you can’t pose yourself and see how it feels and stuffs.. but I know you’ll figure it out!!!!

my hardest poses are where her arm is up or shes bending it like, does it fold back on its own?? or is it stiff like her arm?? ug xD its easier to model birds cuz ive seen alot of bird oc's not too many bat ocs ; ;

I would think it would fold back on its own so she could move easier buuut that said she’s your oc hun so experiment and see what works best for you^w^

lazy or not it turned out amazing here I was thinking she couldn't get any cuter. I was also pondering have difficult it would be getting dressed with wings like that, it would definitely be a challenge to do let alone draw

See! This is one of the problems ive been having is #1: how the hell does she fit into shirts/dresses/tops/etc?! They'd have to be modified to fit her wings.. and then #2: how do you draw wings when the arm is in funky positions (i figure itd be similar to drawing a bird but still hard for me cuz i dont want her wings to be a distraction too lol)

I think if she held her arms straight up she could wear a shirt, or a button up. And I think there would have to be a hole in each sleeve for her wing tips . Or have a shirt in which the sleeves are also button up if that makes sense

I love this and the thin lines too but i also love your thick lines :3

which do you prefer tho? c:

hmm maybe thin, so you make make it soo sleek ^w^

i LO V E TH I S

HER AND AIL WOULD LOOK SO CUTE TOGETHER

AGREED OMG

Quite lovely.

thank you <3

You're welcome.

Its so prettyyyyyyy !!

Very very very very kawaii ♡