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A Curse for Nobility
by killer095
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8 years ago
This story is a part of the Aftermath April Contest! Check out the details here:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/26838482/
Elizabeth McDaniels is a charming, compassionate, and rich woman, and is the last in the McDaniels' line. However, she finds herself on the receiving end of an awful curse. Can she continue to be a good person, or will her curse fundamentally change her into the beast she's become?
Humongous thanks to Jesoran for helping me proofread this last minute! Be sure to check out his pictures and stories!
Thanks for reading! I appreciate any and all feedback, so be sure to let me know what you think in the comments below. And if you really liked it, consider contacting me about a possible request or commission.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/26838482/
Elizabeth McDaniels is a charming, compassionate, and rich woman, and is the last in the McDaniels' line. However, she finds herself on the receiving end of an awful curse. Can she continue to be a good person, or will her curse fundamentally change her into the beast she's become?
Humongous thanks to Jesoran for helping me proofread this last minute! Be sure to check out his pictures and stories!
Thanks for reading! I appreciate any and all feedback, so be sure to let me know what you think in the comments below. And if you really liked it, consider contacting me about a possible request or commission.
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Your story had pretty impressive use of uncommon vocabulary as well as descriptive imagery. Like just seeing your use of "circuitous" as an adjective to describe a body part gave your piece a lot of flair. I'm actually quite surprised since I don't expect this kind of writing quality for the type of content this deals with. Regarding content, I honestly lose interest in non-sexual transformation pretty fast, but it seems like your pacing and imagery was enough to maintain my interest despite my own preferences.
A funny thing too is that the design of your character in this story matches the one I had drawn for my game (almost to a tee), lol.
And that's really cool that you're working on a game! I'm looking forward to seeing that concept art soon (unless it's already out, in which case, I need to go searching for that!).
Nah, it's a WIP and won't be out for a while, but this is the character I had designed for it https://i.imgur.com/U2NfrLL.png . So I was kind of chuckling to myself as I read your story over the coincidence.
Oh wow, that's a really cool dragon portrait! I do see the similarities, too, haha. This does make me curious about what kind of game this artwork is for, though.
And also I really wanna see a continuation. Maybe they'll find a spell that'll let Elizabeth have a somewhat human form (I hope you understand what I mean).
But even in this condition this story is AWESOME! ⭐👍
And also I really wanna see an alternative route, where Elizabeth decides to begin a new life as a dragon and flies out very far away. Nothing more, just this turn of events.