Im probily gonna delete this (or) move it to the scraps laters.

but I needs a bit of critique and help with this image im working on.

As you can see in the image above, im using a combination of standard line art and a 3D oriented objects. What do you guys think would mesh the two together?

Was thinking of trashing the line art bit by going over it with another brush type to make it look more painting like, but can't seem to find the right brush for it.

The piece is not pornographic and im trying to go for a more...
its like... somthing out of a amarican comic feel, like from the magazine "Heavy Metal" (which is GREAT mag by the way.)
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Ah, I just got tired of the porno bits of my work,
I want to be able to write/draw comics many people can enjoy, and I notice that once a person get sucked into drawing smut, it eventuly becomes habitual.
For the most part, it helps relive sexual frustration by putting it towards more positive use; but I want to do more with what I have.
so yeah, I guess that be it.

If anyone knows of a good tutorial of different methods of coloring/drawing, mind posting it in the comment section?

thanks yall!