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Louie is a very young anthropomorphic deer, he's probably ten years old. He would find himself... kind of lost in the woods. He hasn't seen his mother for several hours. "Mom! Where are you?" The little deer called out for his mother, as he walked around in fear, ears down. There was no answer from anywhere. I wonder where is his mother. Did she lost him? Or worse? Who knows. As the time passed slowly, the sky began to get dark. "Oh... not now..." The deer said in his mind when he looked at the sky. Guess it is going to rain, but very strongly. He should find somewhere to stay for a while, or the entire night. So he decided to go and find somewhere to stay, it would be good a cave. For his good luckyness, he could find a very big cave right before the storm. He walked in, without thinking about that there would probably be a predator sleeping...
The cave looked kind of empty, but it is probably very, very deep. The deer decided to lay down near the exit and take a nap. "I hope I find my mother soon..." Louie said, as he slowly fell asleep.
Fifteen minutes passed very slowly, a very low and kind of growly voice could be heard coming from far away in the cave. "I smell something... I think it's a deer" Oh crap, there is a predator near to Louie. He better wake up right now! "Hmmm... it is very closer..." The unknown voice went slowly louder and strong footsteps could be hear going closer. But the deer was deeply asleep, the loud sounds weren't doing any effect on him. The predator went closer, and closer until the predator found Louie. "Oh, there he is. Huh, he is sleeping... I wonder why is he in my cave." The predator said in his mind. Wha... uh... okay... lets continue. The predator simply stared at the little deer sleeping in his cave, but he noticed that the deer was shivering. He is probably very cold. The predator took a few steps a little closer, he placed his muzzle close to Louie's ear. "Hey. Wake up, little one." The predator said very softly and low into the deers ear. Fortunately, that didn't wake the deer up by sudden. "Huh...?" The deer began to wake up. He opened his eyes, and then, he noticed that the one that talked to him (which is the predator), was a giant bear! "Ah! Please don't hurt me!" Louie said, terribly scared. "Hey! D-don't be scared. I'm not like the other bears. I promise." The bear said to Louie. "R...really?" Louie asked. "Yeah. If I was like the other bears, I would have killed you already." That's a good point... I think. "I promise I won't hurt you. OK?" The bear said, trying to calm the deer down. The deer simply nodded. "Now, tell me, what are you doing here? Are you lost?" The bear asked. "Y-yeah... I haven't seen my mother in hours." Louie said. "I see..." The bear said, he was worried about him. There was silence for a few seconds. "Wh-what's your name?" Louie asked the bear. "Oh, my name is Thorn. How about you, little deer?" Thorn asked. "I'm Louie." He said. "That's a very cute name for a little deer like you." Thorn said, chuckling. He almost forgot that Louie as shivering of cold and needs to warm up. "Hey, I see you are very cold. Would you let me warm you up?" Thorn asked. "Y-yes..." Louie said in response. "Alright. Come here." Then Thorn gently grabbed Louie, layed down on his back, and then placed the small deer on his fluffy and very warm belly. He also placed his arms all around the deers body, giving him warmth. "There you go... how is it?" Thorn asked. "It's... pretty comfortable." Louie said. "Alright." There was an intense silence around Thorn and Louie for probably a few minutes. Until now. Louie stayed under the bear's arms, lying his ear on Thorn's belly. He then would notice a kind of intense growling of the bear's stomach. Thorn could obviously feel the growling of his belly. "D-don't worry, Louie. I'm not hungry, it's just the food I ate just a little while ago..." Thorn said, he wasn't really saying the truth at all. He was obviously hungry of the deer. "Oh... uh... okay..." The growling of Thorn's stomach was kind of relaxing for Louie. But the deer didn't want so say that, he thought that Thorn would find weird. So he just stayed there, listening to Thorn's belly sounds while Thorn tried to control himself and to not eat Louie.
As the time passed, the storm didn't seem to stop. And the temperature kept going down, making the deer to start shivering. The shivering would make Thorn wake up and notice Louie's intense shivering. He had an idea but he was not sure if Louie would let him do it. Louie then slowly woke up, shivering. "I-It's getting too cold h-here." Louie said. "I know, kid. I know. But have an idea, but I don't know if you will let me. But here it is:
I have a warmer place where you can stay, which is....uh-"
Thorn gets interrupted by Louie. "...Inside your belly?" Louie said. "Uh, yeah. I know it's a crazy idea." Thorn said, embarrassed. A soft blushing would appear on his face. "I... wouldn't really mind..." Louie said. Thorn stayed quiet for several seconds, kind of socked by the deer's answer. "Wha... really?" Thorn asked. "Y-yeah..." Louie said, scratching on the back of his head while looking away, very embarrassed. "If you say so... then come here." Louie then crawled to the giant bear's muzzle. Thorn slowly opened his mouth, giving the deer a view of his insides for a little while. Then Thorn gently grabbed Louie and placed him inside and closed his mouth. His tongue rubbed against Louie's fur, covering him in his warm saliva. Thorn tilted his head, and took one gulp, sending the deer down his throat. As Louie traveled down Thorn's esophagus, he would hear not just one heart, but two hearts beating in both sides! Louie wondered why Thorn has two hearts. It is probably because of his size. I don't know.
After that, Louie landed in Thorn's stomach. It was pretty warm and very big in there. "Oh, I forgot to mention. Like I said, I'm not like the other bears. Since I'm way bigger than them and because I can keep living things like you inside my stomach. Yes, you won't get digested my little deer.
Now, you can keep sleeping." Thorn said, as he went back to sleep. Louie closed his eyes and fell asleep.
AT THE MORNING
A bunch of hours has passed after they fell asleep. But then... Louie would find himself back where he was as he woke up. "Wha... what happened?" Louie wondered to himself. "Thorn? Thorn!" There was no response from.the giant bear. Suddendly, Louie hears the voice of his mother, calling out for him. "Mom?" Louie began to run to where her voice was coming from. "Mom!" Louie said, as he ran to his mother. "Oh, Louie. I was so worried. I'm so glad I could find you." His mother said, giving him a tight hug. Louie came back to his family.
As Louie and his mother began to walk back home, Thorn was hiding behind the bushes, looking at them in satisfaction of taking care of the little deer. Seeing that his job was done, Thorn began to walk away and came back to his big cave.
The end.
Second attempt at writting stories, bois.
I hope you liked my new story.
Constructive Criticisism is totally welcome.
I might make an Audio version of it.
Now I'm going to sleep. It's like almost 2:00 AM here.
K bye.
The cave looked kind of empty, but it is probably very, very deep. The deer decided to lay down near the exit and take a nap. "I hope I find my mother soon..." Louie said, as he slowly fell asleep.
Fifteen minutes passed very slowly, a very low and kind of growly voice could be heard coming from far away in the cave. "I smell something... I think it's a deer" Oh crap, there is a predator near to Louie. He better wake up right now! "Hmmm... it is very closer..." The unknown voice went slowly louder and strong footsteps could be hear going closer. But the deer was deeply asleep, the loud sounds weren't doing any effect on him. The predator went closer, and closer until the predator found Louie. "Oh, there he is. Huh, he is sleeping... I wonder why is he in my cave." The predator said in his mind. Wha... uh... okay... lets continue. The predator simply stared at the little deer sleeping in his cave, but he noticed that the deer was shivering. He is probably very cold. The predator took a few steps a little closer, he placed his muzzle close to Louie's ear. "Hey. Wake up, little one." The predator said very softly and low into the deers ear. Fortunately, that didn't wake the deer up by sudden. "Huh...?" The deer began to wake up. He opened his eyes, and then, he noticed that the one that talked to him (which is the predator), was a giant bear! "Ah! Please don't hurt me!" Louie said, terribly scared. "Hey! D-don't be scared. I'm not like the other bears. I promise." The bear said to Louie. "R...really?" Louie asked. "Yeah. If I was like the other bears, I would have killed you already." That's a good point... I think. "I promise I won't hurt you. OK?" The bear said, trying to calm the deer down. The deer simply nodded. "Now, tell me, what are you doing here? Are you lost?" The bear asked. "Y-yeah... I haven't seen my mother in hours." Louie said. "I see..." The bear said, he was worried about him. There was silence for a few seconds. "Wh-what's your name?" Louie asked the bear. "Oh, my name is Thorn. How about you, little deer?" Thorn asked. "I'm Louie." He said. "That's a very cute name for a little deer like you." Thorn said, chuckling. He almost forgot that Louie as shivering of cold and needs to warm up. "Hey, I see you are very cold. Would you let me warm you up?" Thorn asked. "Y-yes..." Louie said in response. "Alright. Come here." Then Thorn gently grabbed Louie, layed down on his back, and then placed the small deer on his fluffy and very warm belly. He also placed his arms all around the deers body, giving him warmth. "There you go... how is it?" Thorn asked. "It's... pretty comfortable." Louie said. "Alright." There was an intense silence around Thorn and Louie for probably a few minutes. Until now. Louie stayed under the bear's arms, lying his ear on Thorn's belly. He then would notice a kind of intense growling of the bear's stomach. Thorn could obviously feel the growling of his belly. "D-don't worry, Louie. I'm not hungry, it's just the food I ate just a little while ago..." Thorn said, he wasn't really saying the truth at all. He was obviously hungry of the deer. "Oh... uh... okay..." The growling of Thorn's stomach was kind of relaxing for Louie. But the deer didn't want so say that, he thought that Thorn would find weird. So he just stayed there, listening to Thorn's belly sounds while Thorn tried to control himself and to not eat Louie.
As the time passed, the storm didn't seem to stop. And the temperature kept going down, making the deer to start shivering. The shivering would make Thorn wake up and notice Louie's intense shivering. He had an idea but he was not sure if Louie would let him do it. Louie then slowly woke up, shivering. "I-It's getting too cold h-here." Louie said. "I know, kid. I know. But have an idea, but I don't know if you will let me. But here it is:
I have a warmer place where you can stay, which is....uh-"
Thorn gets interrupted by Louie. "...Inside your belly?" Louie said. "Uh, yeah. I know it's a crazy idea." Thorn said, embarrassed. A soft blushing would appear on his face. "I... wouldn't really mind..." Louie said. Thorn stayed quiet for several seconds, kind of socked by the deer's answer. "Wha... really?" Thorn asked. "Y-yeah..." Louie said, scratching on the back of his head while looking away, very embarrassed. "If you say so... then come here." Louie then crawled to the giant bear's muzzle. Thorn slowly opened his mouth, giving the deer a view of his insides for a little while. Then Thorn gently grabbed Louie and placed him inside and closed his mouth. His tongue rubbed against Louie's fur, covering him in his warm saliva. Thorn tilted his head, and took one gulp, sending the deer down his throat. As Louie traveled down Thorn's esophagus, he would hear not just one heart, but two hearts beating in both sides! Louie wondered why Thorn has two hearts. It is probably because of his size. I don't know.
After that, Louie landed in Thorn's stomach. It was pretty warm and very big in there. "Oh, I forgot to mention. Like I said, I'm not like the other bears. Since I'm way bigger than them and because I can keep living things like you inside my stomach. Yes, you won't get digested my little deer.
Now, you can keep sleeping." Thorn said, as he went back to sleep. Louie closed his eyes and fell asleep.
AT THE MORNING
A bunch of hours has passed after they fell asleep. But then... Louie would find himself back where he was as he woke up. "Wha... what happened?" Louie wondered to himself. "Thorn? Thorn!" There was no response from.the giant bear. Suddendly, Louie hears the voice of his mother, calling out for him. "Mom?" Louie began to run to where her voice was coming from. "Mom!" Louie said, as he ran to his mother. "Oh, Louie. I was so worried. I'm so glad I could find you." His mother said, giving him a tight hug. Louie came back to his family.
As Louie and his mother began to walk back home, Thorn was hiding behind the bushes, looking at them in satisfaction of taking care of the little deer. Seeing that his job was done, Thorn began to walk away and came back to his big cave.
The end.
Second attempt at writting stories, bois.
I hope you liked my new story.
Constructive Criticisism is totally welcome.
I might make an Audio version of it.
Now I'm going to sleep. It's like almost 2:00 AM here.
K bye.
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