this is a WIP shot for a pic im working on and i am stuck-diddley-uck with it... it looks stupid and something isnt right about it but i cant just erase it all so i need some advanced critiquing on it. HELP HELP HELP!!!! i dunno what to do and im ashamed to show my teachers because i hate it so much much. i need to get it done though because its stopping all my work from going anywhere...
so yeh. advanced critique required please..
p.s. this account im posting on will soon, not be abandonded but im gonna create a new account soon so if you decide to watch this account when i make my new account i will be sending everyone thats watching me and obnoxious note or just a journal entry say im moving accounts. so yeh...
lool HELP!!! XD
so yeh. advanced critique required please..
p.s. this account im posting on will soon, not be abandonded but im gonna create a new account soon so if you decide to watch this account when i make my new account i will be sending everyone thats watching me and obnoxious note or just a journal entry say im moving accounts. so yeh...
lool HELP!!! XD
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Leopard
Size 900 x 675px
File Size 565 kB
I think its great! :D
the body is well defined and everything looks well thought out.
I can c u have a great grasp on things here. the emotion on her face u nicely captured.
I c something wrong w/ part of the bra... the right boob looks kinda funky w/ the armor over it and I think it needs a few more lines 2 better define it.
The ears, I think, need 2 b a lil bigger. and the direction the left one is faceing is a lil weird. It looks like its facing u.
the body is well defined and everything looks well thought out.
I can c u have a great grasp on things here. the emotion on her face u nicely captured.
I c something wrong w/ part of the bra... the right boob looks kinda funky w/ the armor over it and I think it needs a few more lines 2 better define it.
The ears, I think, need 2 b a lil bigger. and the direction the left one is faceing is a lil weird. It looks like its facing u.
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