Hmmm... quite nice, yes. Would have been nice to know what it was that took him, maybe, or why she delayed (religious reasons, stubbornness, etc.). . A little more colour... But yes, very nice.

Well done.

I know in my head, I just didn't have the words to write it down given the limit, and didn't wanna cheat by giving extra exposition. :3

Thankee for the critique though. I'll bear it in mind next time I do one of these. :3

*grins* To be quite honest, I love this format. I'd be the last person to say I was any good at it, but... it appeals to me. I like taking words out, concentrating things down. Something I learned from reading Chekhov when I was doing my A-Levels.

It isn't always the right way to write, but it's a good skill and a lot of fun. How much can you cram into 100 words... it truly causes me to stop and think about the meaning of each word and throws into sharp relief the shape and structure of every sentence.

Rah. I love it.

Argggghhh!! 100 word stories raise more questions than they answer. :P

I like things that do that! :3

lol why am I not surprised? :P

:P

LOST = <3

Answers < Questions. ^^

This is why I always loved X-Files. Never quite found the truth, but they never stopped searching for it either hehe

:(
Poor woman...

Insensitive doctor though :/

Indeed, on both counts. Though consider perhaps that the doctor may have been saying nothing not because he felt no sympathy, but because he knew that she'd made a tragic mistake and could think of nothing he could say or do to make it better.

Thanks for reading! :3

Ouch.... that's pretty visceral right there....

*nodnod* Indeed... ;-;

I think that technically means you win for this week.... my turn!

now that was powerful...

*hugs...

V.

I wasn't quite sure what I wanted to achieve when I started this, but I figured that being able to get feelings across in the space of just 100 words would be a good challenge to set myself within this one. I'm glad you thought it was successful in that regard! Thanks ever so much Miss V! * hugs *

:3

you are so very welcome....

V.

Hah! That's kinda funny! ..Not the story, I mean, that would make me heartless, but on the topic of 100 words.

I once came up with this silly thing to add to the saying, "A picture says a thousand words," but I've always found good literature to be more effective than a picture; "but a hundred words paint a picture."

Funny how effectively you proved this silly thing I came up with~. x3

A very sweet sentiment indeed! :3

pretty strong stuff dude

Thankee. :3

no prollem

Damn.

Quite. ^^

*Nods.*

Mmm, tis sad, but true.

sad yet....sad :p

sounds challenging enough. so naturally you should like it :P