Mind if I give some criticism?

You broke the 180 rule, she's facing left in the top panels and facing right at the bottom, it has a very distracting effect on the storytelling as it makes it not immediately obvious who she's looking at, even contextually, and the spatial relationships are difficult to gauge based on the choice of shots

I recommend looking up a lot of techniques regarding consistency, Milton Caniff for instance (granted a rather elementary example) always made certain that one panel corresponded very clearly to the one preceding it, every panel leads into the next seamlessly, it def takes a lot of practice and I still struggle myself on personal page projects for my portfolio

otherwise no complaints regarding the artwork itself etc

Wow I really like your comic page...really good art :) Please tell me you have a webpage I can follow this on? :D

-Fox

Top panel is LOL!