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Looks like a fancy, skinny cousin of WildCard.

Sorry, I don't know what WildCard is :/

its a Purple Shortsword from the online comic Tales of the Questor.
its also a pain in the ass, he can never get it to work right.

ahh lul
Never heared of it tho
Maybe I'll look into it when I can spare some time :)

http://www.rhjunior.com/

I think I see where this style is heading to. Here my feedback:

It is still quite elegant, but feels more organic/natural than your usual extremly smooth designs. In general I see that better working for fantasy/historic weapons, while your usual clean style seems fit for highly futuristc weapons, due to the different kinds of production methods. You could actually use that to make a sword look more fantasy style or more sci-fi.

The handle and the beginning of the scabbard are wonderful, even though the purple gems could use some practice/studies. The long brown part of the scabbard however seems basically blocked in with colour, and the blade itself looks only a little bit better. While such mono-colour blocks (with minimal shining effects) worked well in your past designs, they feel out of place in this style.

Textures are really important in this mattter, so it might be worth looking more into that.
You communicated the texture at the handle quite well via the lightning/shadow patterns. Hoever, on plane surfaces like a blade, you can't really use this method, and might need communicate the texture with different methods.
Maybe you have seen such 3D cubes with different textures (like: a granite block, an ice cube, a lava block, a fabric block, etc)? Something like that would probably be a good practice. Of course with textures you are actually likely to use.

I hope that feedback helps! Would love to see you developing this style even more.

PS: I have seen you apply textures via such other methods, for example in
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/26397998/
but for this style it seems to be helpful to expand this skill even more. Even subtle textures can greatly affect how a surface "feels" like.
It's also helpful to collect some texture brushes or texture images that you can apply for quicker textures.

Thank you so much for the feedback!
I have to say, I'm not happy with that work at all.
I don't know how I messed up the gems at all. I think this happend, because I made all colors on one layer and not on multiple.
You are 100% right with the critique!
Maybe I should do this texture cubes or spheres, just to train texturing without using bland textures, cause selfmade textures allways look better.
My main problem is the lineart in this one (I don't like it at all).
So I keep testing till I'm satisfied (and you too) :).

The lineart looks fine to me, but then again, I don't really have experience with lineart

yeah, it went over my budget lol. Like the blade though. I just like the Runic one I got. I Hope to see more awesome designs.
Sorry, I won't be able to commission you for a while though. I will be waiting for a commission that I been wanting to get done for a long while.

All good dude, no need to excuse^^
I know, that my designs are more expensive :/
But like I said, I'm allmost allways around :)