This is a brief description of the story of a devil, a god and devilgod and how they created the world my character's reside in like woods of wolfs in my book Safire the blue flame. You may find the desription odd but i have written my first book called Souless that's in a notebook. my second called Howler which is my second thats in a notebook Safire the blue flame was going to be my third but its now my fourth sense i started a book in the middle of both safire and howler called Broken. Don''t worry to those reading you don't need to read the first book first so please don't stop reading Safire the blue flame.
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Well it is cool that you have created a pantheon and a folklore/mytho for your world and its beliefs. However its structure, ideas, and reasoning’s are very painful when compared to other such said pantheons, and folklore/mythos. Gods are a tricky thing to develop because they hold entire new dimensions for your story but can ruin it if you are not careful. Especially gods who walk among mortals and there servants/worshippers because that can ruin a tale even more. it is a fantasy so you can do any form that you wish, however such things hold your entire story in a balance.
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