Comments given to CH1 , gave me encouragement to speed up a little ;)
So here comes part 2 - Air Force themed this time.
When You get through this , You'll know names of some main-characters ;)
A little description of appearance , but only a little.
I'm still working on reference sheets , so don't worry - You'll get know to characters bios , and appearances ;)
Enjoy chapter 2 , and please comment - it's important to me , to improve my writing , based on Your opinion.
Why theres no "Military" theme? :/
So here comes part 2 - Air Force themed this time.
When You get through this , You'll know names of some main-characters ;)
A little description of appearance , but only a little.
I'm still working on reference sheets , so don't worry - You'll get know to characters bios , and appearances ;)
Enjoy chapter 2 , and please comment - it's important to me , to improve my writing , based on Your opinion.
Why theres no "Military" theme? :/
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All pilots in the Air Force are officers. And generally rather than saying someone is an officer of the Air Force you'd say that your grandfather is a Colonel in the Air Force. And outside of a deployed location, they won't be in a barracks either!
For two-seat aircraft like the B-2, there's a PIC (Pilot in Command) and a Co-pilot. While he is a second pilot, it's not called "second pilot"
A squadron commander is going to be a Lt. Colonel at least. A single squadron would most likely have only one type of plane. And a Wing would specialize in one mission. So you wouldn't find B-2, AC-130's, and F-22's in the same squadron. Probably not even on the same base.
Well , I'm not really into Air Force thats why I screw up ranks - sorry about that.
And generally rather than saying someone is an officer of the Air Force you'd say that your grandfather is a Colonel in the Air Force
Thanks for correction :) I'll note that.
And outside of a deployed location, they won't be in a barracks either!
Sorry about that... But who said that this is US Air Force? :P
For two-seat aircraft like the B-2, there's a PIC (Pilot in Command) and a Co-pilot. While he is a second pilot, it's not called "second pilot"
Thanks , I'll remember that ^^
A single squadron would most likely have only one type of plane. And a Wing would specialize in one mission. So you wouldn't find B-2, AC-130's, and F-22's in the same squadron. Probably not even on the same base.
Yes , but I wanted it to be more interesting , and that's why I've put other type of planes in 'one bag' ;)
Once more , thank You for Your comment :)
If you have any questions about the military in order to write a more accurate story feel free to ask.