*Fangirl squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees*

*hugs* X//3

Hehe, I had a feeling Keys had something to do with this. Looks great

I'm guessing you took stars off because of the bed, wall, and ceiling.

the moment I read "Luxurious Tail" on the first page, I was like " oooh, one of keys shenanigans... "

Seriously, it's like his calling card or something

side note

7/10, too much tail

What's next? Too much water when that's literally the point?

Tails are always great

Hope Keys isn't one of those people who think 7/10 is a bad score. :P

Agreed. While 7 out of 10 isn't a great score. It is a passable/decent score.

This is probably one of the best Dragon Transformations I've seen you draw yet. I guess the added element of color really makes it stand out. I also like your idea that even though the Wizard character using a crystal ball to communicate with a friend who's using an iPhone is pretty clever.

Wait, you can connect your crystal ball to the mundane telephone network? Nice.

looks great! How long did this take you to color?

These pages went relatively quick, maybe 5-7 hours each including sketching and inking. That's comparable to recent Dragon Problems pages and significantly faster than the 12 or so hours I average on Crimson Flag pages (granted, we have less background detail here too). I like the flat color format and will probably be using it again!

Hah. I think you caught on he was trying to annoy you and you didn't give him what he wanted XD

Now I'm wondering how good it would have to be to get a 10.

That score of 0.

I think I've gushed about this comic enough as it is, but y'know...just in case?

This thing's amazing, obviously. There's so many great firsts in here! Turnin' Virmir all Dragonair-y in here, doing the first...questionably...enjoyable TF for our favorite G-rated fox? Plus, there's so much fun with the intensity during it all! The initial reaction, the 'oh trees the tail is STILL GOING WHY?!' expression, and, of course, SmugKeys here. The dumbfounded reaction at the unexpected 'not bad, actually' still makes me crack up. Ever-confident Keys, '...wait, what?'

The range of comical facial expressions is, as ever, a delight. The cartoony style is just perfect for all these great shenanigans.

Of course, thank you. Thank you so much for this whole thing. Iunno what possessed you to draw this bit of comic in the first place, but man do I appreciate it.

Back to beta testing on those collars, then! We'll need at least a 7.5/10 before public release...

Ha ha, glad you like! If something looks fun to draw, I will draw it.

What a professional. *Applauds* <3

I would have given it a 7 as well, only docking points for the growth and the most likely MtF TG. 6 if it can't be reversed.

The comic, however? It gets a 9 from me.

Hey, the collar had Virmir's girl name on it. This wasn't unexpected.

Oh, right. #FailedASpotCheck

How did he get your number? You made the mistake of registering on the Do Not Call Registry, which doesn't work, of course.

Seven outta ten? I'm guessing with the broken bed, there would be some -minus points

You're much too generous... Damaged room and the destruction of the bed would cost you. Then again you can maybe just magic another one up.

Heh the way the hair looks on her makes her look a bit cute. :P

It always does. <3

Of course it had to be LunarKeys behind that xD

7/10
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