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VincentCorbeau, this is the last two lines of his poem that can be found here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/26309069/
So uhh, before anybody else points it out, yes I did spell "moar". I had accidentally started spelling "goals" halfway through "more" and found "moar" to be the only way to recover.
Kinda comedic at that I suppose, hope you don't mind.
Supplies I used are basically same as last, save for the fricken' sweet golden ink.
and gotta be honest I feel like I can do better, especially with those diamonds
Edit: Yeah, I'm redoing this. Probably by the end of the week, with fricken' sweet gold ink this time.
VincentCorbeau, this is the last two lines of his poem that can be found here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/26309069/So uhh, before anybody else points it out, yes I did spell "moar". I had accidentally started spelling "goals" halfway through "more" and found "moar" to be the only way to recover.
Kinda comedic at that I suppose, hope you don't mind.
Supplies I used are basically same as last, save for the fricken' sweet golden ink.
Edit: Yeah, I'm redoing this. Probably by the end of the week, with fricken' sweet gold ink this time.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fantasy
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Size 1280 x 699px
File Size 148.2 kB
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Ah, if only we had a pen-knife and some parchment that could stand the erasures. Nevertheless, I truly appreciate the effort!
I'm not really upset you misspelled more as 'moar', as this was a request. It's not like I pay you for it! And you can always come back to it later if you're not satisfied. I would make a suggestion to perhaps equalize the line lengths, as the amount of white space in the lower halves of the two lines overpowers (for lack of a better term) just a bit. To fix this, I recommend maybe indenting the lower halves of each line slightly (if that suits you), and writing it out as such should you ever decide to tackle it again:
The grandest goals although
->proposed with ease,
So oft' require much more
->than words to seize.*
*: 'seize' seems to have also been misspelt, which I almost didn't catch myself.
On another note, even if you don't do commissions, you should definitely set up a way to accept tips since you take requests. It makes sense to me.
Anyway, if you would like to, let me know your thoughts on this.
Again, thanks!
~Vincent Corbeau
I'm not really upset you misspelled more as 'moar', as this was a request. It's not like I pay you for it! And you can always come back to it later if you're not satisfied. I would make a suggestion to perhaps equalize the line lengths, as the amount of white space in the lower halves of the two lines overpowers (for lack of a better term) just a bit. To fix this, I recommend maybe indenting the lower halves of each line slightly (if that suits you), and writing it out as such should you ever decide to tackle it again:
The grandest goals although
->proposed with ease,
So oft' require much more
->than words to seize.*
*: 'seize' seems to have also been misspelt, which I almost didn't catch myself.
On another note, even if you don't do commissions, you should definitely set up a way to accept tips since you take requests. It makes sense to me.
Anyway, if you would like to, let me know your thoughts on this.
Again, thanks!
~Vincent Corbeau
Yeah, I definitely agree with you on all of those fronts, I may have another go at this one.
I feel like the inter line spacing also makes this feel a bit too loose, I'll tighten it up next time.
Paired with the indentation I feel like it should make the poem look a lot more solid.
(and also fuck you're right seize is spelled wrong oh god I didn't even see that)
For tips, I wouldn't be against it I suppose.
I just don't want this calligraphy to become more than something I do for fun, you feel?
I feel like the inter line spacing also makes this feel a bit too loose, I'll tighten it up next time.
Paired with the indentation I feel like it should make the poem look a lot more solid.
(and also fuck you're right seize is spelled wrong oh god I didn't even see that)
For tips, I wouldn't be against it I suppose.
I just don't want this calligraphy to become more than something I do for fun, you feel?
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