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This is me and Whisker`s family <3 That little guy to our left is Nazareth, our son.
All characters © Senrynku 2009 by Jon and Quin
This is me and Whisker`s family <3 That little guy to our left is Nazareth, our son.
All characters © Senrynku 2009 by Jon and Quin
Category All / All
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Size 1280 x 924px
File Size 199.5 kB
Awesome piccy~
Just a couple of problems- With Quin, the forehead is HUGE and unnatural. You should have the bottom point of the tiara between the eyes, and lower the hairline to fit. Oh, and the gap between the breasts are a bit... wide. It looks a little off, so try and make them a little bigger and/or rounder to narrow the gap a little. You don't want to make her look anorexic, right? Otherwise, she's jaw-droppingly beautiful~ (and sexy)
Thavidu is actually very well-done! His eyes look girly, but that only makes him look bishonen. That'd usually be good, unless you're going for a tough/epic look~ I don't know how to correct this, though, so sorry. ^^;
Nazareth is actually the best-drawn of the three- he looks so cute and adorable yet epic at the same time~ ...but... His nipples look... weird. XD You should bring them closer to the center just by a centimeter or so each. they should be just a little away from the center of each pectoral (pectoral- the male equalivent of breast, referencing to the area). Also, his eyes look very odd. I know you're trying for a glow look, but you should retain an outline of the eye, preferrably with a color a little darker than the eye itself, to make the separation apparent.
How's that for helpful critique? I hope it helped! <3
BTW, did I ever tell you I love how you draw footpaws? so cute. <3
Just a couple of problems- With Quin, the forehead is HUGE and unnatural. You should have the bottom point of the tiara between the eyes, and lower the hairline to fit. Oh, and the gap between the breasts are a bit... wide. It looks a little off, so try and make them a little bigger and/or rounder to narrow the gap a little. You don't want to make her look anorexic, right? Otherwise, she's jaw-droppingly beautiful~ (and sexy)
Thavidu is actually very well-done! His eyes look girly, but that only makes him look bishonen. That'd usually be good, unless you're going for a tough/epic look~ I don't know how to correct this, though, so sorry. ^^;
Nazareth is actually the best-drawn of the three- he looks so cute and adorable yet epic at the same time~ ...but... His nipples look... weird. XD You should bring them closer to the center just by a centimeter or so each. they should be just a little away from the center of each pectoral (pectoral- the male equalivent of breast, referencing to the area). Also, his eyes look very odd. I know you're trying for a glow look, but you should retain an outline of the eye, preferrably with a color a little darker than the eye itself, to make the separation apparent.
How's that for helpful critique? I hope it helped! <3
BTW, did I ever tell you I love how you draw footpaws? so cute. <3
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