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So on July 20th i get a note from 
xk2x that her friend (who is one of my watchers) was a bit upset that he didnt say hi to me at AC.. Apparently he was nearly face to face with me but didnt make the move and was kicking himself about it.... Now, i cant have one of my fellow watchers doing that!..
Come on guys i know im scary and big (yeah right) but you can always come up to me and start up a chat.
So both xk2x plotted and planed behind his back and I did this!
XD
SEt up is post work out and shower..
and a simple, HEY!> I KNOW YOU! from Trermor to Yunin
so this is for you
yunin Hop you enjoy and i hope i got the details right :)
btw.. next AC.. come on up and talk to me dude XD
Special Shout out to
knuxlight for the one on one for color... This is the out come.. :) how did i do?
Tremorwolf ©
Alden belongs to Yunin ©
xk2x that her friend (who is one of my watchers) was a bit upset that he didnt say hi to me at AC.. Apparently he was nearly face to face with me but didnt make the move and was kicking himself about it.... Now, i cant have one of my fellow watchers doing that!.. Come on guys i know im scary and big (yeah right) but you can always come up to me and start up a chat.
So both xk2x plotted and planed behind his back and I did this!
XD
SEt up is post work out and shower..
and a simple, HEY!> I KNOW YOU! from Trermor to Yunin
so this is for you
yunin Hop you enjoy and i hope i got the details right :)btw.. next AC.. come on up and talk to me dude XD
Special Shout out to
knuxlight for the one on one for color... This is the out come.. :) how did i do?Tremorwolf ©
Alden belongs to Yunin ©
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Muscle
Species Wolf
Size 1000 x 768px
File Size 437.1 kB
Well Tremor, I gotta say you show a lot of improvement on this pic. Good placement of characters and well done expressions show that you do put a lot of care in your work.
Other then the major anatomy issues id say you get a good rating on this one. You’ve definitely improved overall and I like the look of this pic. Though my only real issue are your proportions. I think you may have been going for a very large and powerful look but you also need to reflect that in the size of the torso and not only in the arms and legs. Hey, I love a guy with big arms and killer legs but hes got to have the chest and abs to back it up right?
Color wise you just need to work on your brushwork. I see way too many strokes and your blending needs to be worked on. I can also see some odd color splotches on your body. I suggest you add a color pallet of your characters at the corner of your page so that you can use it for reference. That was an easy lesson I had to learn the hard way myself. Colors are a bit dark but that could be your preference more then anything else.
Out of a possible five, I give this pic a three. You got a good grasp of the scene, the emotion is easily read and overall id say it’s a pretty nice pic.
Work on your proportions more and your anatomy as well and I might bump you up to a four. *winks* I think you did Ok on the colors but I know you can do better. *thumbs up to the wolf* Looking good babe.
And thats my critique with this pic, keep it up hun.
Other then the major anatomy issues id say you get a good rating on this one. You’ve definitely improved overall and I like the look of this pic. Though my only real issue are your proportions. I think you may have been going for a very large and powerful look but you also need to reflect that in the size of the torso and not only in the arms and legs. Hey, I love a guy with big arms and killer legs but hes got to have the chest and abs to back it up right?
Color wise you just need to work on your brushwork. I see way too many strokes and your blending needs to be worked on. I can also see some odd color splotches on your body. I suggest you add a color pallet of your characters at the corner of your page so that you can use it for reference. That was an easy lesson I had to learn the hard way myself. Colors are a bit dark but that could be your preference more then anything else.
Out of a possible five, I give this pic a three. You got a good grasp of the scene, the emotion is easily read and overall id say it’s a pretty nice pic.
Work on your proportions more and your anatomy as well and I might bump you up to a four. *winks* I think you did Ok on the colors but I know you can do better. *thumbs up to the wolf* Looking good babe.
And thats my critique with this pic, keep it up hun.
Heheh. What can I say? I'm grateful you would do this. X3
.....*sigh* Look, I'm just shy when it comes to talking to people I don't already know. I'm trying to get over that and at the same time be more sociable within the fandom and out. I know your a cool guy, I watch you. XP It's just...well, what I just said. Add on that your art introduces me to the fandom and that just makes me more shy and makes me not wanna make a fool of myself somehow even more. XP
.....*sigh* Look, I'm just shy when it comes to talking to people I don't already know. I'm trying to get over that and at the same time be more sociable within the fandom and out. I know your a cool guy, I watch you. XP It's just...well, what I just said. Add on that your art introduces me to the fandom and that just makes me more shy and makes me not wanna make a fool of myself somehow even more. XP
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