Great for a WIP....

My only issue is that since the woman is so white, I only see her, and then I see the wolf, I would consider wither a lighter background, (but it may wash out your image) or adding highlights to his face and arm....and also keep in mind to make something really black....you often have to add a lighter color next ot it or make it look so black that it seems blue...^.~

I'm planning on making the wolf really shiny, so it actually looks black and not grey. so I'll be working on that, thanks :) I hope that the highlights and contrast on the wolf even the image a bit, but if doesn't work I'll have to lighten the bg as you suggested or darken the woman. Thanks for the inupt, I really appreciate it :D

Not a problem....if you need any advice on something, I am all ears....^.^


Been through art school for about five years....and I am my own worst critic here>.<

Art school? That's so cool!
Hm..I really need some input about the women's hand, could you help me? The angle of her wrist bothers me, but I can't identify the problem well enough to fix it D:

look at your hands, and then look at someone elses. you have it so that she has no wrist at all ..or barely. there is a slender bow at the base where the wrist bone itself protrudes from our very apendage. (sp)....curve it in more and try sketching hands as "studies"....

Drawing sketches of anatomy daily will greatly improve your skill...I cannot stress it enough...^.^

Her forearm is also too short. If you look at yours, it is just the same lenth as it is from the shoulder to the elbow as the elbow to the hand....

Nix the background comment, the lighter outline may have it for you....lol...although an outline can be considered overused...

You have some neat potential here...keep it up!

Everything is overused, in some way or the other, so I don't mind it xD Thanks for the comments :D (again xD)

XD....

yes, in art, there is no such thing as an original idea anymore...>.<