lacking bayonet-ness? :)...other than that looking good so far :)

as far as I've seen by looking up bayonets ( having never drawn them before) as far as I'd seen those are knives typically attatched to a gun. So I wasn't sure how to show that in a frontal view. being that I didn't want to cut out some of the character I didn't want to cheat ya and just give you a mid shot.

So if you like I can re draw the picture so long as you provide me with a good reference for a bayonet and how it can be applied to the way you wish to have applied to your character.

ya can just add the butt of the rifle like its on his back or something since that would be where it'd be if he isnt in some kinda gunfight ;)
or have him carrying the rifle along his arm (bayonet he has is just a rifle with the blade at the end...believe like most XD...no real abscure designs to it either....yet! XD)

hope that helps a bit^^'...if ya do feel ya need to redraw it that is your choice though :)

update looks awesome! :D *dunno how i missed it*

excellent! I shall procede with the inking and ze coloring

okies :)