FA+
Shop
292
Views
Views
0
Favorites
Favorites
Category
Story / Pregnancy
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 50 x 50
File Size 31.5 kB
Report this content
More from Twiga
Warning! If you are searching for nothing but yiff and porn turn back there is nothing for you here. But if you want sweetness and silliness come on in!
This story has humans and furs and a wacky mish-mash of cliches from cartoons and movies from the 80s and 90s If you want some wacky adventure and laughter come on in!
This story has humans and furs and a wacky mish-mash of cliches from cartoons and movies from the 80s and 90s If you want some wacky adventure and laughter come on in!
Category Story / Pregnancy
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 31.5 kB
Wacky indeed. :3
The structure was good and it made me smirk at several points, but if you're sticking with the script-like format might I suggest the use of emboldening or italics to further separate text from the name of the character speaking? At times when the characters were shouting it was a little confusing regarding what was text and what was character referencing. :
Overall though a very amusing idea! :3
The structure was good and it made me smirk at several points, but if you're sticking with the script-like format might I suggest the use of emboldening or italics to further separate text from the name of the character speaking? At times when the characters were shouting it was a little confusing regarding what was text and what was character referencing. :
Overall though a very amusing idea! :3
Comments