I just realized it looks bad (Personally) because of the sketchy linearts and the weird hair coloring (his hair supposed to be sandy blonde)
The linearts are based on a scanned sketchy drawing as well, so yeah

I should try for pure traditional shaded drawing or pure digital drawing... perhaps

Nonetheless, this is a drawing for my recent commissioner which is  natureboy95
You can see the drawing he commissioned here https://www.furaffinity.net/view/25939790/