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Hey guys, sorry for the delay on this! i had a huge writers block for awhile, but i am happy to present the final part of the prologue! As always, criticism is welcome and you are free to post ideas that i may use! also does anyone have good music to listen to when writing? music helps me get more ideas flowing.
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“Hey, there he is! STOP, THIEF!” The voice snapped the young rabbit out a sense of safety, and he quickly found himself running once more from the....”police” of his home of Hagira. Opan, as the young rabbit was called, tried to find paths around the buildings that would confuse the police, but it seemed that the only path was to try and jump up onto the roofs. (sigh, just great, I suck at wall climbing.) Opan thought to himself. (but i'll get captured if I don't do this, and then I may get executed! No way am I chancing that!) With his chance to escape rapidly closing, Opan wasted no time trying to climb up onto the rooftops. Fate may have just loved him that day, because he was able to climb up and slip only once. Focused more on trying to get out of sight, however, the rabbit moved like lightning along the rooftops, and to the observant eye it was quite a sight. Spotting a small alleway hidden amongst the houses, Opan slid off the roof and threw his body into the darker patch of the alley.
He hatled his breath when he heard voices clamoring nearby. “Well someone must have seen where he landed! It was right around here!” “No use in standing around here. Split up and search for him, IMMEDIATLY!” Not one of the police wasted time standing around, lest they incur the wrath of their commander. Seeing his chance to slip by and return to his hideout, Opan slowly slid out of the alleyway and down to the slums.
The slums looked horrible, with many people lying out on the street either sick or hung over. The perfect people to hide among for Opan, the police didn't normally go down to the slums anyway. After 2 quick rights and a left, Opan reached his hideout: a small, broken down shack nestled among the slightly better looking homes. Quickly double checking to see if anyone was tailing him, Opan then open the door to his home and went to the table to tally up the loot he got. A voice from behind made Opan jump right out of his chair and swirl around quickly, only to see a familiar face laughing at him.
“Hahahahahahaaaa! Oh my god that face! I will never forget that in my life! I was waiting at least for a hello but you didn't even notice me in the doorway!” “Well excuse me, Fallsa, but I just got done dodging a bunch of police that were to eager to be my friends.” The tall hound responded in an almost exasperated tone “Again?! Normally the police don't even bother with us, now they tail us whenever they see us cough. Anyway, what did you “Borrow”?” Opan's face quickly changing from annoyed to excitement upon being asked the question, he rushed over and open the pouch that contained his prize: a bunch of gold coins....and a bright jewel that changed colors! “Wow man, this is quite a haul! We'll be able to treat everyone in the slums to a nice meal with this stuff!”
Fallsa was about to continue, but he noticed his friend didn't respond as eager as he did. “Hey, what is it? Don't tell me you plan to keep this all to yourself, you greedy freak.” “What? No! I just...i think we should keep the jewel.” “hm? Why's that? Looks like a normal jewel to me.” “i'm not sure, I just feel like we should keep it.” “Heh, alright, bunny. We'll keep this just this once.” Fallsa adjusted himself to be infront of his friend. “however, I don't think we can keep your diaper on. I might have scared you more than I thought....” “huh?” Opan looked down at his now soggy diaper, and his faced went from white to bright red almost instantly. “Fallsa!!!!” “Hahaha, sorry, couldn't resit scaring you. Come on, let's get changed, and then enjoy the spoils!”
CURRENT EQUIPMENT;
Opan: Steel Dagger, Leather Tunic, Rouge's Swifter's Diapers
CURRENT STATS;
Opan;
Max HP: 125
Max MP: 75
Story is here for those that cannot download the file!
“Hey, there he is! STOP, THIEF!” The voice snapped the young rabbit out a sense of safety, and he quickly found himself running once more from the....”police” of his home of Hagira. Opan, as the young rabbit was called, tried to find paths around the buildings that would confuse the police, but it seemed that the only path was to try and jump up onto the roofs. (sigh, just great, I suck at wall climbing.) Opan thought to himself. (but i'll get captured if I don't do this, and then I may get executed! No way am I chancing that!) With his chance to escape rapidly closing, Opan wasted no time trying to climb up onto the rooftops. Fate may have just loved him that day, because he was able to climb up and slip only once. Focused more on trying to get out of sight, however, the rabbit moved like lightning along the rooftops, and to the observant eye it was quite a sight. Spotting a small alleway hidden amongst the houses, Opan slid off the roof and threw his body into the darker patch of the alley.
He hatled his breath when he heard voices clamoring nearby. “Well someone must have seen where he landed! It was right around here!” “No use in standing around here. Split up and search for him, IMMEDIATLY!” Not one of the police wasted time standing around, lest they incur the wrath of their commander. Seeing his chance to slip by and return to his hideout, Opan slowly slid out of the alleyway and down to the slums.
The slums looked horrible, with many people lying out on the street either sick or hung over. The perfect people to hide among for Opan, the police didn't normally go down to the slums anyway. After 2 quick rights and a left, Opan reached his hideout: a small, broken down shack nestled among the slightly better looking homes. Quickly double checking to see if anyone was tailing him, Opan then open the door to his home and went to the table to tally up the loot he got. A voice from behind made Opan jump right out of his chair and swirl around quickly, only to see a familiar face laughing at him.
“Hahahahahahaaaa! Oh my god that face! I will never forget that in my life! I was waiting at least for a hello but you didn't even notice me in the doorway!” “Well excuse me, Fallsa, but I just got done dodging a bunch of police that were to eager to be my friends.” The tall hound responded in an almost exasperated tone “Again?! Normally the police don't even bother with us, now they tail us whenever they see us cough. Anyway, what did you “Borrow”?” Opan's face quickly changing from annoyed to excitement upon being asked the question, he rushed over and open the pouch that contained his prize: a bunch of gold coins....and a bright jewel that changed colors! “Wow man, this is quite a haul! We'll be able to treat everyone in the slums to a nice meal with this stuff!”
Fallsa was about to continue, but he noticed his friend didn't respond as eager as he did. “Hey, what is it? Don't tell me you plan to keep this all to yourself, you greedy freak.” “What? No! I just...i think we should keep the jewel.” “hm? Why's that? Looks like a normal jewel to me.” “i'm not sure, I just feel like we should keep it.” “Heh, alright, bunny. We'll keep this just this once.” Fallsa adjusted himself to be infront of his friend. “however, I don't think we can keep your diaper on. I might have scared you more than I thought....” “huh?” Opan looked down at his now soggy diaper, and his faced went from white to bright red almost instantly. “Fallsa!!!!” “Hahaha, sorry, couldn't resit scaring you. Come on, let's get changed, and then enjoy the spoils!”
CURRENT EQUIPMENT;
Opan: Steel Dagger, Leather Tunic, Rouge's Swifter's Diapers
CURRENT STATS;
Opan;
Max HP: 125
Max MP: 75
Category Story / All
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 27.4 kB
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