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This is a very short story revolving around Rin Tohsaka, an anime character from the series Fate, enjoying a cigarette on her lunch break. It's just something that cropped up in my mind one day and I managed to get it jotted down relatively fast, though it did take longer to edit to my satisfaction than I would have liked. On top of this, my solo smoking stories have historically gotten the least amount of views out of all my works on here, but I saw no point in writing a personal piece and not uploading it, despite the relatively low views I expect this story to garner.
In saying that, I would absolutely love comments, especially creative critiques and suggestions on how it could have been done better, or what might be appreciated along these lines in the future, as I would like to write more anime based fetish pieces.
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Story Description
This is a very short story revolving around Rin Tohsaka, an anime character from the series Fate, enjoying a cigarette on her lunch break. It's just something that cropped up in my mind one day and I managed to get it jotted down relatively fast, though it did take longer to edit to my satisfaction than I would have liked. On top of this, my solo smoking stories have historically gotten the least amount of views out of all my works on here, but I saw no point in writing a personal piece and not uploading it, despite the relatively low views I expect this story to garner.
In saying that, I would absolutely love comments, especially creative critiques and suggestions on how it could have been done better, or what might be appreciated along these lines in the future, as I would like to write more anime based fetish pieces.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 99 x 99px
File Size 17.3 kB
It was a good read not my particular interest but you did well with describing the action and the way it made her feel. As for getting more experience in writing about it you could combine it with another topic like balloons lemons battle scene exc :) Like before and after school or other dance event. :)
Thank you very much for your comments, I really appreciate your kind words, especially since this isn't a central interest of yours. Combining it with another topic was something on my mind, if only to give the story a little more substance than simply focusing on smoking again. But again, thank you.
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