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This was a story I wrote semi-for myself and semi-for Toonvasion. I really enjoy the Predarap universe, but a story about gangs isn't the same without gang warfare, so I wanted to give WildClawz an enemy that he couldn't just brainwash. Well two, but I'll talk more about the other one later.
Thus, punk rock gangster queen Thorn was born. You'll see more of her.
EDIT: I should actually clarify her powers. She's not aware that she has any powers, but she can bend reality to what she thinks it should be. Thinks she can stop a punch? She can. Thinks she should have a squad of tough guys to throw someone out of her restaurant? She does. It would be incredibly powerful if she could directly control it, but she basically thinks of herself as a mob boss with a rival. Her powers get stronger the more she feeds on predarap, but she can't just suck it out of people, she has to take it from CDs or hearing it.
Thus, punk rock gangster queen Thorn was born. You'll see more of her.
EDIT: I should actually clarify her powers. She's not aware that she has any powers, but she can bend reality to what she thinks it should be. Thinks she can stop a punch? She can. Thinks she should have a squad of tough guys to throw someone out of her restaurant? She does. It would be incredibly powerful if she could directly control it, but she basically thinks of herself as a mob boss with a rival. Her powers get stronger the more she feeds on predarap, but she can't just suck it out of people, she has to take it from CDs or hearing it.
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I love this! She's powerful, strong, focused, and it apears she can control whatever power is behind the predarap. I'm not sure who I like more at this point. And the idea that she can also make her thralls revert into their former lives/personas/forms with no idea of their previous meetings is icing on the cake. She can have the do anything for her, and if they get caught, they can't say a word, because they won't remember what they were doing, why they did it, or how it was done. Very clever, sir. I'm curious to see how this other gang will respond. Heck, this is a series I wouldn't mind doing a short story for as homage, just because of how well it's been written out.
I should actually clarify her powers. She's not aware that she has any powers, but she can bend reality to what she thinks it should be. Thinks she can stop a punch? She can. Thinks she should have a squad of tough guys to throw someone out of her restaurant? She does. It would be incredibly powerful if she could directly control it, but she basically thinks of herself as a mob boss with a rival. Her powers get stronger the more she feeds on predarap, but she can't just suck it out of people, she has to take it from CDs or hearing it. Still, she's a very fun character. One I've been thinking about for a while.
I should actually clarify her powers. She's not aware that she has any powers, but she can bend reality to what she thinks it should be. Thinks she can stop a punch? She can. Thinks she should have a squad of tough guys to throw someone out of her restaurant? She does. It would be incredibly powerful if she could directly control it, but she basically thinks of herself as a mob boss with a rival. Her powers get stronger the more she feeds on predarap, but she can't just suck it out of people, she has to take it from CDs or hearing it. Still, she's a very fun character. One I've been thinking about for a while.
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