Ok.

First, yes I messed this up. A few places :P Including her chest, her proportions and her hands.

The one on her thigh ended up looking too small, even though I wanted it to look like it was at the right perspective, it just ended up looking plain tiny lol
Her chest should be bigger and also her costume isnt quite right around where the tie is.

I was going for the ff9 style where their heads are stupidly disproportionate to their bodies, but I didn't get it right. It sjut looks odd.

I coloured this for practice, and was quite happy with the cute fat moogle she's leaning on enough to submit :)

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