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The following is a trade story for 
Cheshire_Cat_Master (check out his page, he writes some great stuff) about CheshireCatMasters' two main OC's, the Cheshire Cat, and of course, the Cheshire Cats' Master. In this story, Cheshire helps himself to an entire house worth of food, and the owner of the house itself.
This was an interesting story to write. It's considerably darker than most of what you'll see on my page, but dark in an interesting kind of way that's more ambiguous than overtly dark. But it's still filled with plenty of tummy goodness to go around.
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NoctoNommer (check out her page too. She's also awesome. )
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLY RUBS, BELLY WORSHIP (kind of), BLOATING, BURPING (lots of it), HICCUPS, IMPLIED DIGESTION, STUFFING, VORE, WEIGHT GAIN.
Not your thing? Do not read. If it's your thing, you've come to the right place.
Cheshire_Cat_Master (check out his page, he writes some great stuff) about CheshireCatMasters' two main OC's, the Cheshire Cat, and of course, the Cheshire Cats' Master. In this story, Cheshire helps himself to an entire house worth of food, and the owner of the house itself. This was an interesting story to write. It's considerably darker than most of what you'll see on my page, but dark in an interesting kind of way that's more ambiguous than overtly dark. But it's still filled with plenty of tummy goodness to go around.
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NoctoNommer (check out her page too. She's also awesome. )CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLY RUBS, BELLY WORSHIP (kind of), BLOATING, BURPING (lots of it), HICCUPS, IMPLIED DIGESTION, STUFFING, VORE, WEIGHT GAIN.
Not your thing? Do not read. If it's your thing, you've come to the right place.
Category Story / Vore
Species Feline (Other)
Size 120 x 69px
File Size 293.3 kB
I have read the story, and I am thoroughly pleased. I know this was slightly out of your comfort zone, so I want to thank you once again for accepting this idea for a Trade, and for putting the effort you did put into it.
You wrote both Cheshire and the Master exceptionally well; Cheshire was wonderfully unnerving, and wonderfully gluttonous. I thought you did a good job at finding a balance with the character, making him equal parts sophisticated and crass; evil yet affectionate; teasing yet sincere; childish yet authoritative. And of course, seeing the big, fiendish kitty "go at it" the way he did was a delight to read...for multiple and perhaps obvious reasons...
As for the Master, I loved how you made hime especially subservient, yet you added a bit of a mischievous spark to the character that kept him from being totally spineless or a total floormat, which is good. I really do need to put more work into his "firm" side, and there was just a tiny amount of that here, which I liked. (Also, nice reference with his dream; he and a certain freckle-faced young fellow would definitely get along.)
The twist ending was handled quite well, I thought, managing to say a lot while saying relatively little. And your usual brand of onomatopoeia was delicious to read as ever. (I had to pause for a moment when you actually had the big kitty let out a burp that took up TWO PAGES. Now I have to find a way to top that kind of volume in my own work. Great. XD)
All in all, fine work, and thank you once again! I'd say this trade went pretty well. Can't wait to read more of your work in the future, and I hope you had fun writing this, as much as I had reading it!
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
You wrote both Cheshire and the Master exceptionally well; Cheshire was wonderfully unnerving, and wonderfully gluttonous. I thought you did a good job at finding a balance with the character, making him equal parts sophisticated and crass; evil yet affectionate; teasing yet sincere; childish yet authoritative. And of course, seeing the big, fiendish kitty "go at it" the way he did was a delight to read...for multiple and perhaps obvious reasons...
As for the Master, I loved how you made hime especially subservient, yet you added a bit of a mischievous spark to the character that kept him from being totally spineless or a total floormat, which is good. I really do need to put more work into his "firm" side, and there was just a tiny amount of that here, which I liked. (Also, nice reference with his dream; he and a certain freckle-faced young fellow would definitely get along.)
The twist ending was handled quite well, I thought, managing to say a lot while saying relatively little. And your usual brand of onomatopoeia was delicious to read as ever. (I had to pause for a moment when you actually had the big kitty let out a burp that took up TWO PAGES. Now I have to find a way to top that kind of volume in my own work. Great. XD)
All in all, fine work, and thank you once again! I'd say this trade went pretty well. Can't wait to read more of your work in the future, and I hope you had fun writing this, as much as I had reading it!
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
Thank you very much. I'm glad Cheshire and the Master lived up to your expectation and standard.
It was an enjoyable and interesting experience. I usually don't write these sorts of stories, but they're enjoyable to explore all the same, and this was no exception.
I'm glad you liked that easter egg. It came when you said the Master was basically a British version of Shy.
You're very welcome. I think this was a fun trade, and I hope you'll enjoy the upcoming trades that I'll be uploading soon enough.
It was an enjoyable and interesting experience. I usually don't write these sorts of stories, but they're enjoyable to explore all the same, and this was no exception.
I'm glad you liked that easter egg. It came when you said the Master was basically a British version of Shy.
You're very welcome. I think this was a fun trade, and I hope you'll enjoy the upcoming trades that I'll be uploading soon enough.
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