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Decided that I wasn't happy with the commission for icono..
So.. I fixed'ed it
So.. I fixed'ed it
Category All / All
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Size 1140 x 1202px
File Size 435.4 kB
Ok, I found this via "I<3critique" so hopefully you don't mind me talking a bit :3
You did a nice job with the overall composition of the picture. The colours are decent and they don't distract the eyes. The background, though being multi-coloured, fits the scenery well and decently underlines the appearence of the drawing.
As to improve you could try to add more details like wrinkles in the clothing. You can look for appropriate ressources regarding the structures of wrinkles, there should be plenty on the web I think. Seams also go well with clothes. Keep your mind open for potential details that can add a great amount of atmosphere to your drawings.
Another thing is that the hands of the figure seem pretty small compared to the rest of the body. It could be just me bit it looks kinda strange. I'd recomment to get a second opinion concerning the hands as I am not sure.
You did a nice job at shading the picture. There are no spots that look notably misplaced or strange. I also like the structure of the featers and the little shadows here and there.
So that's it. I hope this chunk of words will help you a little bit.
Don't lose confidence and keep drawing. Good luck :3
You did a nice job with the overall composition of the picture. The colours are decent and they don't distract the eyes. The background, though being multi-coloured, fits the scenery well and decently underlines the appearence of the drawing.
As to improve you could try to add more details like wrinkles in the clothing. You can look for appropriate ressources regarding the structures of wrinkles, there should be plenty on the web I think. Seams also go well with clothes. Keep your mind open for potential details that can add a great amount of atmosphere to your drawings.
Another thing is that the hands of the figure seem pretty small compared to the rest of the body. It could be just me bit it looks kinda strange. I'd recomment to get a second opinion concerning the hands as I am not sure.
You did a nice job at shading the picture. There are no spots that look notably misplaced or strange. I also like the structure of the featers and the little shadows here and there.
So that's it. I hope this chunk of words will help you a little bit.
Don't lose confidence and keep drawing. Good luck :3
Thanks for the input..
Don't know if you're aware, but the background is actually a representation of the character's chakras..
The hands are probably a little small, but, that could be said about the character's legs too. Also, the way the eagle's head is really just makes it way harder to accurately look at proportions because the character's head is way larger than a human's (which is where I'm most experienced
Don't know if you're aware, but the background is actually a representation of the character's chakras..
The hands are probably a little small, but, that could be said about the character's legs too. Also, the way the eagle's head is really just makes it way harder to accurately look at proportions because the character's head is way larger than a human's (which is where I'm most experienced
No, I must admit I don't know that much about chakras. The only thing I know is that chacras are very essential points in a flow of energy, I fear...
I don't really know about eagles as well. I tried to compare it to regular anthro proportions and the hands caught my attention. As I said I don't know if it is proper to point that out. You better get a second opinion about that.
I don't really know about eagles as well. I tried to compare it to regular anthro proportions and the hands caught my attention. As I said I don't know if it is proper to point that out. You better get a second opinion about that.
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