Fursona : Hyhm
Requester :
hyhm
Practice Focuses: Lighting, Anatomy, Pose, Background, Linework
Side Notes:
Yuppers, I'm a little proud of this one, though i know I fucked up on some things~
I'm liking the new backgrounds I'm doin...They are really easy and nice looking <3
Other then that, Im happy with the way the anatomy came out, as well as the lighting,
the hair was harder cause for some reason I cannot draw highlights XP
And that is supposed to be an oriental dragon on the ring.....ya....
PLEASE CRITIQUE THIS, THANK YOU!!!
ILoveCritique
Artwork ©
Me~<3
Requester :
hyhmPractice Focuses: Lighting, Anatomy, Pose, Background, Linework
Side Notes:
Yuppers, I'm a little proud of this one, though i know I fucked up on some things~
I'm liking the new backgrounds I'm doin...They are really easy and nice looking <3
Other then that, Im happy with the way the anatomy came out, as well as the lighting,
the hair was harder cause for some reason I cannot draw highlights XP
And that is supposed to be an oriental dragon on the ring.....ya....
PLEASE CRITIQUE THIS, THANK YOU!!!
ILoveCritiqueArtwork ©
Me~<3
Category All / All
Species Western Dragon
Size 1000 x 1200px
File Size 358 kB
well im not so good at criticizing but, if it helps you to improve... The right arms looks a little unproporcional to the left one; need to improve on the feet design specially on the sizes of each toe. Mh...now talking about the hair design, i think it came out really well, i like it. And and about the background .... im not so fond into that stuff cause i think its unecesary, keeps away the attention on your character and what you want is to stand him out above everything else. Maybe if you use a bold background with light coloring.
Well, hope that helps you out in getting better. Regards!
Well, hope that helps you out in getting better. Regards!
Thank you, I honestly thought i fucked up on the hair,
but ya, i know I gotta work the limbs, didn't notice so much with this one, but ya I see it XP
I kinda rushed the feet XP But ya, I really gotta work on hands and feet a lot.
It helps out a lot, people like you I appreciate, taking the time to critique, thank you~
but ya, i know I gotta work the limbs, didn't notice so much with this one, but ya I see it XP
I kinda rushed the feet XP But ya, I really gotta work on hands and feet a lot.
It helps out a lot, people like you I appreciate, taking the time to critique, thank you~
Hey, thought you dropped off the face of the earth. *giggles* This came out pretty good. :) I'm noticing a trend that you probably want to just spend a long time sketching and working specifically on limb proportions, since that's an issue in multiple pictures, but otherwise it seems fine!
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